popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.


[Hard]
00:15:589 (5) - nazi - 1 grid down and 1 grid left to make the flower looks better? 好
00:34:875 (2,3) - not parallel 修改了下
01:42:374 (9) - spacing issue 嗯
02:09:267 (7,1) - stack them? no
That's all I can find. GL~

spboxer3 wrote:

Mystica's Hyper

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  mapping
  (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:17:946 (3,6,2) - [nazi] let (3,6) full stack on the (2)'s slider end. It's have a kinda off 哭了那個沒必要疊著啊
2. 00:27:375 (4,1) - [nazi] please let those full stack. It's have a bit off ^
3. 01:02:946 (2) - awkward slider~you can make the layout better~ 根本亂七八糟 隨手拉slider.弧度都不對了... 哭了爲什麽我覺得弧度挺正常只是不圓滑啊
4. 01:42:803 (1,6) - [nazi] please let those full stack. It's have a bit off

^
額...淚包阿 你真的最近作圖都沒什麼美感了= = slider我承認我想用新的拉法試試所以出現了這種
給人感覺 隨手拉slider阿... 其實這是一種西域風情的感覺

good luck~

1. 00:01:446 (1,2,3,4) - wided zigzag-streams on Hard?...imo I'd reduce distance snap there and make for example like this:
   
   Click me!

   
   Well but still unsure bout that... on Muya's diff this is as slider with repeats, in ignore's diff there spinner appears... what about you make it as slider with repeats too?
2. 00:04:660 (3,4,5,6) - for Hard diff it's too confusing
3. 00:05:517 (1) - this slider really could look better if you just move 2nd slider point a bit to middle of slider, like this:
   
   Click me!

   
4. 00:08:089 (1,2,3,4) - again wided zigzag-streams...
5. 00:21:803 (1,2,3,4) - ^
6. 00:23:946 (6) - move slider end 1 grid left
7. 00:26:089 (1,2,3,4) - they overlap each others and it looks ugly
8. 00:30:589 (4) - ...no this is not how you make slider
9. 00:36:160 (7,1) - things like this cannot appear on hard diff, jump is TOO big
10. 00:37:660 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - looks confusing
11. 00:40:017 (2,3,4) - ^
12. 00:40:339 (3,4,2,3,4) - ^
13. 01:02:946 (2) - this slider is really ugly, please remake it
14. 01:45:589 (3,4,5) - i'd move this 1 grid up to make stack mixed with slider covering with the beginning of 01:44:410 (7)
15. 01:45:803 (5,6,7,8) - unintuitive jump
16. 02:02:089 (3) - this slider could be shaped better
17. 02:02:517 (4) - same with this
18. 02:02:946 (5,6,7) - ugly overlapping

1. 00:27:589 (6) - how about moving it to the center ?
2. 00:38:946 (5,6,7,8) - I kinda don't like this, just it's unexcepted and might cause that even experience player would miss at first try
3. 01:00:160 (5) - move that 3 grids down?(on 4th grid level - writing that only because I've noticed you used 3rd level)
4. 01:22:660 (4) - new combo as for 1/3 snap change?
5. 01:35:625 (2) - kinda sounds weird and out of place and might cause confusion with rhythm, would be better if you added note on 01:35:478 to make it sound better
6. 01:37:232 (7) - nc

1. 00:08:303 (3,4) - you shall move this 3 grids left(on 4th level)
2. 00:25:017 (4) - 4 grids down then 3 grids right
3. 00:53:089 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - not sure about this... might cause confusion while playing
4. 01:08:875 (9) - i'd rather put it on 1/4
5. 01:35:517 (9) - nc
6. 02:11:196 (6) - nc

Bass wrote:

[Mystica's Hyper]
By the way... I misread it as "Mystearica's Hyper" , lol... XD
Well... 5.00 star Hard...
I suggest AR 7 and OD 6. no.Cause AR7 just make it harder to read and play.
Finish hitsound it's overused a bit on: actually I feel finish fits there part.so sorry
00:01:875 - 00:28:446.
00:43:232 - 01:09:589
01:37:874 - 02:05:089

1. 00:01:446 (1,2,3,4) - wided zigzag-streams on Hard?...imo I'd reduce distance snap there and make for example like this: I find some one else to test it they find np here...So sorry
   
   Click me!

   
   Well but still unsure bout that... on Muya's diff this is as slider with repeats, in ignore's diff there spinner appears... what about you make it as slider with repeats too? it depends mapper's design..So no change
2. 00:04:660 (3,4,5,6) - for Hard diff it's too confusing actually not.
3. 00:05:517 (1) - this slider really could look better if you just move 2nd slider point a bit to middle of slider, like this: ok changed some.
   
   Click me!

   
4. 00:08:089 (1,2,3,4) - again wided zigzag-streams... ^
5. 00:21:803 (1,2,3,4) - ^
6. 00:23:946 (6) - move slider end 1 grid left
7. 00:26:089 (1,2,3,4) - they overlap each others and it looks ugly I don't think so ummm.
8. 00:30:589 (4) - ...no this is not how you make slider just wanna get it a little curve.So changed a bit.
9. 00:36:160 (7,1) - things like this cannot appear on hard diff, jump is TOO big changed
10. 00:37:660 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - looks confusing .....it seems clear.
11. 00:40:017 (2,3,4) - ^
12. 00:40:339 (3,4,2,3,4) - ^
13. 01:02:946 (2) - this slider is really ugly, please remake it ok changed
14. 01:45:589 (3,4,5) - i'd move this 1 grid up to make stack mixed with slider covering with the beginning of 01:44:410 (7) chaned to a note
15. 01:45:803 (5,6,7,8) - unintuitive jump seems ok so no change
16. 02:02:089 (3) - this slider could be shaped better k
17. 02:02:517 (4) - same with this
18. 02:02:946 (5,6,7) - ugly overlapping

Dark Fang wrote:

[Mystica's Hyper]

oh... can you stoped overused Finish...? that's noisy I think it's well for this song and I haven't overused it.00:23:946 (6) - why don't you try Ctrl+R? I just make a little jump here
00:37:232 (6,7) - parallel? actually I see it's parallel
01:23:946 (1) - if use default skin, some players can't see this note. coverd by hitbuster. I think most of player will not meet that question
02:11:946 (3) - NC or adjust Distance? no

Thanks for mod but no changes.
Update for some bass' mod

1. Another and ignore's could do with a break imo.

1. Please raise the stacking leniency to 0.3 or 0.4.

1. Lots of streams here, at times I felt it was too clustered and difficult to read.

1. There's lots of places where this uses 1/4 instead of 1/6, it works in some parts but others not so much...

1. Audio Lead-in may be too long for Beginner & Normal...i'd like to choose 1000ms as well.
2. Change the diff name from ignore's Lunatic to ingore's Extra or ignore's Extreme may be more suit for IIDX
3. And also consider to change diff name from Normal to Standard ?

1. 00:24:375 (4) - NC here for new chorum?
2. 00:27:375 (2) - try to change the beat here?
   
3. 00:42:378 - add a note here?

1. 00:37:446 (3) - i suppose it's better to start from prev white line, so move it to there ( 00:37:232 - ) and extend a repeat?

1. Everything looks fine

1. 01:25:660 (7,8) - change to a slider here?

1. I'd like to choose AR9 for this diff~
2. 01:35:625 (2) - move to next red line? emm....actually i suppose move (4) to 01:36:267 - and stack with (5) may be better XD