backstep wrote:

Relax song >3

General

- Cyan combo color it's similar, so I suggest you use other color. Maybe green like this ?

lol but i think they looks fine,no changed...

Easy

01:20:027 (3) - Add whistle to head of slider to follow lyrics. fixed
01:21:067 (4) - Change Whistle to clap. fixed
01:31:125 (1) - Add whistle at head of slider. fixed
01:33:899 (1) - Add whistle at reverse arrow. fixed
01:38:755 (4) - Whistle. no
02:12:743 (1) - Remove clap ;w; lol add finish instead

Normal

01:04:940 (4) - Tail of slider add finish. fixed
02:14:131 (4) - ^ fixed
02:31:818 (2) - Whistle fixed
03:48:986 (4) - Head of slider add finish. fixed

Hinsvar's Hard

Fine for me xD

Insane

01:08:668 (7,8) - Swap whistle of these note. i changed my mind to del the whistle in 7 so...
01:15:171 (6) - Head of slider add whistle. (Follow lyrics) fixed
01:16:558 (1) - ^ fixed
01:20:027 (3) - ^ fixed
01:23:668 (3) - ^ no
02:06:501 (3) - Add clap at reverse slider. no
02:24:535 (1) - Whistle. fixed
02:25:922 (1) - ^ no
02:29:391 (3) - Head of slider add whistle. fixed

That's all I can find good luck

1. 00:23:842(1) - 这里为什么加NC呢？
2. 01:04:766(5) - 感觉这个Slider在01:05:287结束更好一些?
3. 01:07:541(3) - 同上，在01:08:061结束
4. 01:30:084(3) - 建议不要在Easy里放1/2...
5. 01:32:859(2) - ^
6. 01:39:449(1) - 换成finish?
7. 02:16:905(3) - end at 02:17:425?
8. 03:23:148(2) - clap
9. 03:48:466(4) - end at 03:48:986?

1. 00:46:732(3) - Spacing
2. 04:00:951(1) - 即使是Normal，这个slider和spinner靠的也太近了吧...

1. 03:21:587(6) - Ctrl+R?

1. 01:25:576(2) - Ctrl+R?
2. 02:15:171(5) - 这跳略坑 送分图可不能这样
3. 02:26:443(6,7) - Spacing
4. 02:52:975(1) - whistle?

a3272509123 wrote:

[Hinsvar's Hard]

1. 03:21:587(6) - Ctrl+R? Nope; I rearranged the pattern here, instead.

Hi mjw5150

• General
  ● Good

• Easy
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:16:212 (1,2,3,4) - maybe use distance 1.2 (or 1.0) and change form to triangle
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  So simple slider form...maybe change some slider form

• Normal
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:16:212 (1,2,3,4) - some as Easy ^^
  ● 00:46:732 (3) - prev distance 1.0 maybe change to 0.8?
  ● 02:44:998 (4) - move to x:240 y:260 symmetry to 02:43:610 (2)
  ● 02:45:344 (1) - if you change ^ move to x:302 y:198 - distance 0.8 :3
  
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Looks good

• Hinsvar's Hard
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 02:03:379 (5) - grid snap and distance off...and move on x:169 y:203 - snap to 02:02:339 (3) :3
  ● 03:01:125 (3,4) - distance looks strange :3 maybe change it to 1.0?
  ● 03:27:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - please move it on center....like this http://puu.sh/yi6g
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Really good diff :3 so symmetric, i like it

• Insane
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● Good
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Interesting Insane looks good

Sorry for nazi mod, but I can't find more problems.
Starrrrr

IchiGUN wrote:

>Settings

● Good

>Mapping

● 02:03:379 (5) - grid snap and distance off...and move on x:169 y:203 - snap to 02:02:339 (3) :3 Oh, okay.
● 03:01:125 (3,4) - distance looks strange :3 maybe change it to 1.0? Fine.
● 03:27:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - please move it on center....like this http://puu.sh/yi6g Eh, I suppose that it should be fine for now. No changes.

>Hitsounds

● Good
___________________
Really good diff :3 so symmetric, i like it lol thx

a3272509123 wrote:

From the challenge queue~


[General]
Nothing found~


[Easy]

1. 00:23:842(1) - 这里为什么加NC呢？删掉了
2. 01:04:766(5) - 感觉这个Slider在01:05:287结束更好一些? 改了
3. 01:07:541(3) - 同上，在01:08:061结束 改了
4. 01:30:084(3) - 建议不要在Easy里放1/2... 唔 就先这样吧 暂时找不到更好的处理方式了lol
5. 01:32:859(2) - ^ 同上
6. 01:39:449(1) - 换成finish? 感觉finish音量大了 没改
7. 02:16:905(3) - end at 02:17:425? 改了
8. 03:23:148(2) - clap 改了
9. 03:48:466(4) - end at 03:48:986? 改了

[Normal]

1. 00:46:732(3) - Spacing 改了
2. 04:00:951(1) - 即使是Normal，这个slider和spinner靠的也太近了吧... 没改 感觉距离蛮合适

[Insane]

1. 01:25:576(2) - Ctrl+R? 改了 换了下排版
2. 02:15:171(5) - 这跳略坑 送分图可不能这样 233
3. 02:26:443(6,7) - Spacing 改了
4. 02:52:975(1) - whistle? 没加 感觉有点whistle不合

That's all!Really nice map~Good luck~

IchiGUN wrote:

Hi mjw5150

mod from Challenge Queue, so just suggestion ^^

• General
  ● Good

===========================

• Easy
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:16:212 (1,2,3,4) - maybe use distance 1.2 (or 1.0) and change form to triangle
  i don't want to use 1.0x here since the spacing is too large lol
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  So simple slider form...maybe change some slider form

===========================

• Normal
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:16:212 (1,2,3,4) - some as Easy ^^ same as easy
  ● 00:46:732 (3) - prev distance 1.0 maybe change to 0.8? fixed
  ● 02:44:998 (4) - move to x:240 y:260 symmetry to 02:43:610 (2) fixed
  ● 02:45:344 (1) - if you change ^ move to x:302 y:198 - distance 0.8 :3 fixed
  
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Looks good

===========================

• Hinsvar's Hard
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 02:03:379 (5) - grid snap and distance off...and move on x:169 y:203 - snap to 02:02:339 (3) :3
  ● 03:01:125 (3,4) - distance looks strange :3 maybe change it to 1.0?
  ● 03:27:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - please move it on center....like this http://puu.sh/yi6g
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Really good diff :3 so symmetric, i like it

===========================

• Insane
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● Good
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Interesting Insane looks good

Sorry for nazi mod, but I can't find more problems.
Starrrrr

Leorda wrote:

Oh hi there

[Easy]
00:51:587 (2) - Clap? fixed
01:04:073 (3) - New combo for your combo pattern? fixed
02:41:876 (3) - End at previous red tick for following vocal fixed
03:23:495 (3) - ^ fixed
04:01:645 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read this, so this possibly hidden for them sorry,but i think it is readable enough,no changed


[Normal]
00:39:102 (3) - Add clap at tail slider fixed
00:45:865 (2) - Add finish at head slider fixed
01:31:125 (1) - Add clap at repeating slider fixed
02:02:165 (2) - Extend this slider to next white tick for better rhythm? fixed
03:22:107 (1) - Add finish at repeating slider and end slider fixed


[Insane]
01:31:125 (3) - Add clap at tail slider fixed
02:05:807 (1,2) - Not stack correctly with head slider at gameplay fixed


Good luck

Leorda wrote:

[Hinsvar's Hard]
00:51:414 (8) - Add 1 repeating slider? Decided to remap that spot instead.

1. 01:13:264 (7) - add whistle at start?
2. 01:18:292 (6,7) - either fix this inconsistent spacing or add a note at 01:18:466
3. 01:38:061 (6) - forgot whistle at start?
4. 02:06:501 (3) - how about adding clap at start and reverse, sound better imo ^^
5. 03:13:784 (1) - whistle?
6. 03:16:558 (1) - ^
7. 03:16:558 (1) - ^

1. 00:17:599 (5) - whistle at start
2. 00:24:188 (6) - move this to x:232 y:244?
3. 00:39:795 (3,6) - add finish? (like Insane)
4. 00:41:183 (1) - finish?
5. 00:45:345 (6) - ^
6. 02:50:547 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - hmm this pattern here's not a good idea imo, especially when u used this with jump. How about coming up with a new pattern?
7. 02:55:055 (1) - remove nc here
8. 04:05:113 (1) - whistle?
   Kiai parts will be more lively if you add more finish ^^ just look at Insane =P
   here are just some suggestions of mine, apply for all kiai parts if u change ^^
9. 01:25:576 (3) - finish?
10. 01:28:350 (3) - finish at start?
11. 01:32:165 (2) - finish at end?
12. 01:33:032 (5,1) - finish

1. 01:42:223 (5) - finish at end?
2. 04:04:420 (1) - add whistle here? :>

1. 01:21:067 (4) - remove finish at end
2. things seem fine to me o3o

kazumikos wrote:

[Hinsvar's Hard]
whistle spamming... lol Yeah.
Why dont use more clap like Insane? It's really good o_o using clap only at the end of mapset like is such a waste =3= Well... I just can't see why should claps be used before them. It's just weird.

1. 00:17:599 (5) - whistle at start Oh great, I missed that one. Done.
2. 00:24:188 (6) - move this to x:232 y:244? Nope, I'm making a square here and I'm sure enough my calculations are correct.
3. 00:39:795 (3,6) - add finish? (like Insane) Only added one on (3).
4. 00:41:183 (1) - finish? k
5. 00:45:345 (6) - ^ Oh... okay, I guess.
6. 02:50:547 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - hmm this pattern here's not a good idea imo, especially when u used this with jump. How about coming up with a new pattern? You must be modding the old version. I've remapped that part. And it's a fun part, IMO \:D/
7. 02:55:055 (1) - remove nc here Remapped that part before.
8. 04:05:113 (1) - whistle? Used Finish instead.
   Kiai parts will be more lively if you add more finish ^^ just look at Insane =P
   here are just some suggestions of mine, apply for all kiai parts if u change ^^
9. 01:25:576 (3) - finish? k
10. 01:28:350 (3) - finish at start? Fine.
11. 01:32:165 (2) - finish at end? Done.
12. 01:33:032 (5,1) - finish Only at (1).

kazumikos wrote:

Hello~
[Insane]

1. 01:13:264 (7) - add whistle at start? fixed
2. 01:18:292 (6,7) - either fix this inconsistent spacing or add a note at 01:18:466 fixed the spacing,make it 1.6x as others
3. 01:38:061 (6) - forgot whistle at start? fixed
4. 02:06:501 (3) - how about adding clap at start and reverse, sound better imo ^^ no,sorry
5. 03:13:784 (1) - whistle? fixed
6. 03:16:558 (1) - ^ fixed
7. 03:16:558 (1) - ^

I enjoy the map very much ^^ (until u threw in bunches of streams ruthlessly lol) thx XD

[Normal]

1. 01:42:223 (5) - finish at end? fixed
2. 04:04:420 (1) - add whistle here? :> no

[Easy]

1. 01:21:067 (4) - remove finish at end fixed
2. things seem fine to me o3o

Nice done mjw ^^ have a good luck star

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo.

Modded my own diff by myself (sounds weird, I know), did stuff with Finishes, made a new green timing point, and other small things.

http://puu.sh/Fgd1

k

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[Easy]

1. 00:49:506 (1) - x:144 y:84 ?
2. 01:10:316 (3) - 第2個點 x:172 y:76 ?~
3. 01:16:558 (1,3) - 交換NC ?~ 若有改的話 01:19:333 (1,3) - 也交換NC
4. 01:35:980 (1,3) - 交換NC~
5. 02:48:813 (1,2) - 拉好看一點>w<?
6. 03:26:963 (1,2) - 交換NC ~

[Normal]

1. 00:57:483 (1,2) - 交換NC
2. 01:19:333 (1,3) - ^
3. 02:15:171 (1,2) - ^
4. 02:28:697 (1,2) - ^
5. 03:13:784 (3) - NC
6. 03:16:559 (3) - ^
7. 03:38:755 (3) - ^

[Hinsvar's Hard]

1. Slider Tick Rate use "2" ?
   
   
2. 00:38:235 (3,4) - I feel confused there ;w; , how about let (4) on x:276 y:56
3. 02:13:784 (3) - last point on x:252 y:220
4. 02:47:425 (3) - re whistle change to finish ?~
5. 02:50:547 (4,5,6) - there are confused for me , i think not stack them

[Insane]

1. 00:39:449 (5) - ctrl+R 感覺flow比較順

l1106188 wrote:

[Hinsvar's Hard]

1. Slider Tick Rate use "2" ? Okay.
2. 00:38:235 (3,4) - I feel confused there ;w; , how about let (4) on x:276 y:56 It's still readable, so I decided to not change that.
3. 02:13:784 (3) - last point on x:252 y:220 k, the blanket actually looks better...
4. 02:47:425 (3) - re whistle change to finish ?~ Okay...
5. 02:50:547 (4,5,6) - there are confused for me , i think not stack them This one's readable and playable for me, just like 00:38:235 (3,4). I'll think of that again later, though...

l1106188 wrote:

Hi~
Request from Hinsvar.

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[Easy]

1. 00:49:506 (1) - x:144 y:84 ? 改了
2. 01:10:316 (3) - 第2個點 x:172 y:76 ?~ 改了
3. 01:16:558 (1,3) - 交換NC ?~ 若有改的話 01:19:333 (1,3) - 也交換NC 没改
4. 01:35:980 (1,3) - 交換NC~ 没改
5. 02:48:813 (1,2) - 拉好看一點>w<? 稍微拉了下 不知道变好看没有lol
6. 03:26:963 (1,2) - 交換NC ~

没改

[Normal]

1. 00:57:483 (1,2) - 交換NC
2. 01:19:333 (1,3) - ^ 没改
3. 02:15:171 (1,2) - ^
4. 02:28:697 (1,2) - ^ 没改
5. 03:13:784 (3) - NC
6. 03:16:559 (3) - ^
7. 03:38:755 (3) - ^

其他都改了

[Insane]

1. 00:39:449 (5) - ctrl+R 感覺flow比較順

唔 还是觉得原来的好 没改~

就這些了~
good song & good luck~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ mjw5150 ~

Mod time for my luck Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]

1. 00:59:217 (3) - Try change angle,-5 is better.
2. 03:35:980 - Add finish.
3. 03:38:755 - Remove clap and Add finish.

[Hinsvar's Hard]

1. AR-1 much better with play.
2. Reduce volume to 60% pls,since your use many finish hitsound.
3. 03:02:685 - Remove whistle.
4. 03:24:015 - Add finish and remove 03:24:188 (6).
5. 04:05:113 (1) - Remove finish,really no fit here.

[Normal]

1. 02:03:032 (1) - Remove short new combo.
2. 03:44:998 (1) - ^
3. 03:38:755 - Remove clap and Add finish.

[Easy]

1. 03:38:755 - Remove clap and Add finish.

That's all i can find ~ Nice map and song ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

1. 00:35:634 (2,3) - They have wider spacing than others.
2. 01:21:414 (x) - Uhm...a triple is really needed here imo...can you try?

1. 01:05:114 (3) - I felt something weird here. Consider to change a pattern to follow the music.
   
2. 01:30:258 (4) - Add a finish here? It fits the music.
3. 01:37:888 (1,2,3,4) - Uhm...I don't think this pattern is great...they look crowded and the flow isn't that good.
4. 02:29:564 (1,2,3,4) - Not bad, but please look them in testplay mode. The stack is broken, not beautiful. Can you rearrange them?
5. 02:50:547 (4,5,6,1) - It's really confusing pattern. Two-repeats-slider shouldn't be used in such a way, or at least avoid stacking 02:51:240 (5,6) with it.
6. 04:00:951 (1) - Remove a clap from the end. It doesn't fit.
7. 04:01:645 (2,3,4) - ^

1. 02:05:113 (3,1,2) - (nazi)The stack looks broken due to stack leniency. Try to move (1,2) right&below by 1grid?
2. 02:54:622 (2) - Listen the music carefully. The stream sound isn't here so just remove this note?
3. 02:55:749 (12) - Add a new combo to adjust it to the downbeat.(also remove from 02:56:096 (1))
4. 02:58:524 (9) - ^
5. 03:36:674 (2) - Where are 8 and 6!? (joke this slider looked like 7)

Suzully wrote:

876PRO! owo

[Normal]

1. 00:35:634 (2,3) - They have wider spacing than others. fixed
2. 01:21:414 (x) - Uhm...a triple is really needed here imo...can you try? ok,add it here and 02:30:778

[Insane]

1. 02:05:113 (3,1,2) - (nazi)The stack looks broken due to stack leniency. Try to move (1,2) right&below by 1grid? fixed
2. 02:54:622 (2) - Listen the music carefully. The stream sound isn't here so just remove this note? sorry,no changed here,i think it's fine
3. 02:55:749 (12) - Add a new combo to adjust it to the downbeat.(also remove from 02:56:096 (1)) fixed
4. 02:58:524 (9) - ^ fixed
5. 03:36:674 (2) - Where are 8 and 6!? (joke this slider looked like 7) XD

Suzully wrote:

[Hinsvar's Hard]

1. 01:05:114 (3) - I felt something weird here. Consider to change a pattern to follow the music. Done.
2. 01:30:258 (4) - Add a finish here? It fits the music. ^
3. 01:37:888 (1,2,3,4) - Uhm...I don't think this pattern is great...they look crowded and the flow isn't that good. Uh... I personally think that they look and play good, though.
4. 02:29:564 (1,2,3,4) - Not bad, but please look them in testplay mode. The stack is broken, not beautiful. Can you rearrange them? ^. Also, I'm sure enough the stack isn't broken.
5. 02:50:547 (4,5,6,1) - It's really confusing pattern. Two-repeats-slider shouldn't be used in such a way, or at least avoid stacking 02:51:240 (5,6) with it. ^
6. 04:00:951 (1) - Remove a clap from the end. It doesn't fit. A 1/1 clap pattern fits at the end of the song, IMO, so nope.
7. 04:01:645 (2,3,4) - ^^

makkura wrote:

is it just me or I can't download this map properly... osu says it doesn't know how to deal with this kind of file, doesn't even appear in .osz

Haya wrote:

If you click on the download button, you can only download the MP3 file >.<