Mystica wrote:

Here comes my mod.

[General]
mute the slider may fits more? o.o? I'm using the muteslider?

[Neris]
00:56:837 (3) - some grids down ok~ change it

[Amil]
01:00:068 (2,3,4) - looks a little crowded..may put another place ok~ change it~

[Airy]
00:07:914 (1) - not beautiful really o.o? still hold. I hear the opinion of other people

other seems fine..Good map..Star

kosiga wrote:

Mystica wrote:

Here comes my mod.

[General]
mute the slider may fits more? o.o? I'm using the muteslider?

[Neris]
00:56:837 (3) - some grids down ok~ change it

[Amil]
01:00:068 (2,3,4) - looks a little crowded..may put another place ok~ change it~

[Airy]
00:07:914 (1) - not beautiful really o.o? still hold. I hear the opinion of other people

other seems fine..Good map..Star

Mystica Thanks for mod & Star☆

Mystica wrote:

I means you'd better mute the sliderside ummmm...

elmauri11 wrote:

This song and beatmap is great *-* ..... I hope aprproved soon... Luck !

Byakugan249 wrote:

OMG this song is so moe i had to mod it >.<. found this on #modreqs last night.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun

[General]
CLEAR!

[Neris]
00:59:606 (1) - how about moving it here so that (3,4,1) is shaped like a triangle? if you do this, then move (4) around so that the notes align to the bottom part of the triangle.　ok~. change it :3
OMG this map is so fun to play >.<

[Amil]
00:04:222 (1) - hmm i think the overlap looks kind of bad, so move it to the right but make sure it's faced diagonally like this. ok.change it
00:20:837 (3,4,5) - uhh like this. you might see a difference but move (4) away from the slider because it's overlapping the note. sorry><; This is put to the position of the symmetry pattern
00:44:837 (1) - aww man this is where i messed up at. the flow looks odd for me because of the slider shape, and how it's stacked on the slider's end. i think spacing this slider would make it easier and fun to play for players. I do not dislike this pattern. so keep now :3 I hear the opinion of other people　
01:09:299 (2) - i suggest moving it between (6) and (3,4). i think it flows a lot smoother as it forms a triangle. i felt a bit uncomfortable when i tried to reach for the next note after (2). change form~
01:27:760 (4) - maybe change the direction...i mean the look of the curved slider? should be like this. this flows a lot smoother and since is a cheerful song i think. i don't speak japanese., it'd be fun for players. ok~
01:28:683 (6) - how about stacking this on the beginning of (4) and the end of (3) so put a nice surprise and a bit of a challenge for players? ok~ change it!

[Airy]
01:23:145 (1,2,3,4) - if you're trying to make a diamond out of this, then this looks bad. if it's intentional, make this a diamond jump so that it'd flow a lot smoother to the next note because these jumps might be unexpected for players. This is intentional. but ok. change diamond form

I guess that's it. This song is so MOOOOE <3 so moe moe moe moe kyun . GL

kosiga wrote:

elmauri11 wrote:

This song and beatmap is great *-* ..... I hope aprproved soon... Luck !

oh. thank you~ but approved o.o? This will be ranked

elmauri11 wrote:

Sorry XD... I wrote wrong... Yeah! I hope will be ranked soon!... again sorry for my bad english

Melophobia wrote:

As requested

[Neris]
00:11:606 (2) - finishっぽい音があるんで小さめで入れるといいかも fixed~
00:20:837 (3) - ^ no change ><
00:41:145 (1) - 終点finish ^
00:42:530 - ずっと1/1のリズムをキープしてるのでこの空白はちょっと違和感あるような とりあえずこれで様子見ます -w-
01:16:222 (5) - 始点finish (Airyでは付いてます) oh.. fixed~

[Amil]
00:01:914 (4,4) - 四角形2つ作るより4を画面中央に置いてstackさせるようにした方が僕は好きです 変えてみました! 他によさそうな配置あったらまた変えるかも
00:05:145 - note追加？タイミングがやらしいので置いてません ><~
00:11:606 (3) - Normalに同じ fixed
00:20:837 (3) - ^ no><
00:37:299 (5,1) - newcombo入れ替えた方が見た目的にベターです ok~
00:41:145 (1) - 終点finish no><
01:05:145 (2) - 始点finish fixed
01:08:683 (6) - (1,2,3)の中央に置いてみては？ちょっと考えます ><
01:15:299 (2) - 01:13:914 (4) - と同じ形にしてみては ok~
01:16:222 (1) - たぶんfinish付け忘れ fixed
01:27:145 (3) - 始点finish ^

[Airy]
00:11:606 (3) - 始点finish fixed
00:20:837 (1) - ^ no><
00:35:606 - 一拍置くのもイイ感じではあるんですがここにNote合った方が違和感ないです～ good :3 added~
00:37:299 - note追加？ no><
00:42:068 (4) - finish ^
00:46:222 (4) - 終点finish ^
01:05:145 (1) - finish fixed
01:21:299 (2) - (1,2)でjump作って直後にアンチジャンプはちょっと読みにくいような・・
前の(2)にstackさせた方が次が読みやすいかも okです! change~
01:27:145 (1) - finish fixed

良い譜面だった！　(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ☆~
頑張れ～

1. nice! I can't find any mistake

1. 01:00:837 (3) - overlap with the 01:00:068 (2) -, so...it's hardlt to see this note lol
2. 01:09:299 (2,3) - makes a bigger distance snap, too close that makes people play fastly, and because of you did two beats (01:08:683 (6,1) - )in front of those notes
   
   Example

   
3. 01:28:683 (6) - useless rhythm IMO lol, remove it?

1. 00:27:145 (5) - overlap with 00:27:299 (1) - , and remove the NC here, add NC at 00:27:299 (1) -
2. 00:33:606 (1) - use two note instead of on slider lol, feel better if do that. I feel a little fast if use the slider here
3. 01:09:145 (2) - ^
4. 01:21:760 (2) - downward slider with feel smoothly XD
   
   Example

   
5. 01:28:683 (5) - useless rhythm as I mention in Amil diff

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii~
You requested in my queue~

[General]
- Maybe just me, but I think the song is too quiet? Get a better mp3? I hear the opinion of other people

[Neris]
00:33:760 (1) - I think this spinner should end at 00:36:530 no change. I leave the interval for normalplayer

[Airy]
00:35:145 (5,4) - Dont silence these notes ? ><　　ok. vol up to 30%

Sorry, thats all I can find.
Well mapped and good luck!
Star~ >w<

LoliSora wrote:

Here's my mod~

[Neris]

1. nice! I can't find any mistake

[Amil]

1. 01:00:837 (3) - overlap with the 01:00:068 (2) -, so...it's hardlt to see this note lol I hear the opinion of other people =w=
2. 01:09:299 (2,3) - makes a bigger distance snap, too close that makes people play fastly, and because of you did two beats (01:08:683 (6,1) - )in front of those notes ok. change it~
   
   Example

   
3. 01:28:683 (6) - useless rhythm IMO lol, remove it? not useless >x<

[Airy]

1. 00:27:145 (5) - overlap with 00:27:299 (1) - , and remove the NC here, add NC at 00:27:299 (1) - sorry, no change ><
2. 00:33:606 (1) - use two note instead of on slider lol, feel better if do that. I feel a little fast if use the slider here ok~ change it
3. 01:09:145 (2) - ^ Consider a little x3
4. 01:21:760 (2) - downward slider with feel smoothly XD ok~ change it
   
   Example

   
5. 01:28:683 (5) - useless rhythm as I mention in Amil diff not useless >x<

Star~(if you give me a kd~XD

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi there

General:

-IMO, offset +20 I hear the opinion of other people @x@

Neris: fine~

Amil:

00:20:837 (3,4,5) - IMO, this seems like 2/3 and not 1/1 because of the spacing, so perhaps space them farther out?

Airy:

00:57:145 (4,5) - move it further out? IMO it's too close to (3) and might make an enjoyable jump ><
01:16:222 (1) - end it 1/3 earlier, and place a hitcircle at 01:16:222 instead?
01:26:222 (3) - add whistle?

nice map =w=

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi
There were few things to point out


[Airy]
01:10:222 (2,3) - Could adjust their spacing by 1.40x? They seem a bit irregular for me. ok~ good :3 change it

For an example

[Amil]
00:05:145 - Really, we need a note at here! no need =x= I do not put it to simplify a timing
00:22:222 (1) - Remove NC This is intentional
00:22:683 (2) - NC ^
00:28:683 (1) - Remove NC ok. change it~
00:29:453 (2) - NC ^
00:30:068 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:55:299 - Add note no change ><


[Neris]
00:05:145 - Add a note please please! >A< same amil diff =A= but think from looking at other mod


Good luck ;D

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ kosiga ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Mp3 volume sound low,you can try up some?(If you can't up volume,i can help you)

ok =x= change it~

[Neris]

1. AR-1 much better with beginner play.

hmm... ok x.x

That's all ~ Clean mapset and lovely song ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

OK ~ Good job ~

Good luck with rank ~

Byakugan249 wrote:

just letting you know if you want to get this ranked, you need 2 more stars.

wmfchris wrote:

[Airy]
00:03:299 (3) - this is highly covered by previous (1), they should be separated fixed~
00:06:991 (4,5) - the jumping is qutie unexpected, considering for those 1/3 spacings, (1,2,3,4) has the normal one but (4,5) is a big jump. Place the NC was as easy to understand
...so many large jumps that I didn't expected, it don't need to be that jumpy (3.5, 4.0x jumps are orz)

I do not think this is a big problem...orz I think this is a range that can accommodate. but ok... I changed some too wide jumps. and I put NC to be easy to understand it.

[Armil]
00:21:299 (4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/371690 make it like that? i can not open this url...

very creative hitsounds (and sounds nice too), but I just think that the jumps are too crazy in [Airy], and that slider overlapping issue should be fixed.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Long time after ~ remodded this map in irc ~

Here you go again :3

Log

23:06 Kawayi_Rika: 00:29:145 (6,7) -
23:06 Kawayi_Rika: this jump is a bit stiff
23:06 kosiga: insane o.o?
23:06 Kawayi_Rika: yep
23:10 kosiga: I'm thinking now ==! Please write a continuance
23:12 Kawayi_Rika: k
23:12 Kawayi_Rika: AR+1 for Hard ?
23:13 kosiga: ok :3
23:13 Kawayi_Rika: 00:25:453 - Add a circle ~ sound much better to me
23:15 Kawayi_Rika: 00:35:606 - change volume to 20%
23:15 kosiga: hmm.. this part 00:09:760 (5,6) - same as pattern. and follow vocal ><!
23:16 Kawayi_Rika: ok ~
23:16 kosiga: volume fixed~
23:16 Kawayi_Rika: other diff too
23:16 Kawayi_Rika: don't use 5% volume
23:16 kosiga: yep
23:19 Kawayi_Rika: AR,OD+1 for normal
23:20 kosiga: also OD o.o?
23:20 Kawayi_Rika: yep
23:20 Kawayi_Rika: if you want
23:20 kosiga: ok :3 fixed
23:21 Kawayi_Rika: 00:54:530 - i really love this hitsound
23:21 kosiga: Even if tick uses vol5%, I do not have a problem maybe?
23:21 kosiga: :>
23:21 Kawayi_Rika: no probleam
23:22 kosiga: sure~
23:23 Kawayi_Rika: ok update pls
23:24 kosiga: 00:29:145 (6,7) -
23:24 kosiga: http://puu.sh/1tKpp
23:24 kosiga: this flow~
23:26 kosiga: ok~ updated :3
23:26 Kawayi_Rika: k
23:26 kosiga: thank you very much :33
23:27 Kawayi_Rika: redownloading
23:30 Kawayi_Rika: 00:29:760 (7) -
23:30 Kawayi_Rika: how about move to X 372 Y 232
23:30 Kawayi_Rika: ?
23:31 kosiga: ok~ changed~
23:31 Kawayi_Rika: k
23:31 Kawayi_Rika: i guess flow better :3
23:31 kosiga: :3
23:32 Kawayi_Rika: also
23:32 Kawayi_Rika: 01:02:376 (3) -
23:32 Kawayi_Rika: ctrl+g?
23:33 Kawayi_Rika: 01:02:837 (4) - this too
23:33 Kawayi_Rika: flow again
23:33 kosiga: yep :3
23:35 kosiga: updated~
23:36 Kawayi_Rika: k
23:39 Kawayi_Rika: [Airy]
23:39 Kawayi_Rika: Inconsistent Artist/TitleUnicode,pls check osu file and fix.
23:39 Kawayi_Rika: last i guess

azu-nyan14 wrote:

Motto ai wo komete gyutto gyutto ne koneko ni shiyoooo~
Very moe song
GL

kosiga wrote:

but koneko ni shiyoooo~ --> This is wrong == It is not a kitten lol

konekone shiyo is correct

Breeze wrote:

I'm not gonna pop this bubble, just leave some my opinions here:
<Airy> diff has many big jumps which might be a little hard to hit while first play, but it becomes better after I play it a few times
I've asked some other player to test this diff, some feel it's hard to tell the spacing, too, and some feel AR9 would fit the big jumps more
Hmm, now idk how to deal with it lol

Breeze wrote:

After some discussion with other members, we recommend HPdrain6, AR7, OD7 for <Airy> diff, it would make this diff more easy to read but also fun with DT mod

kosiga wrote:

then should also change the <Amil> diff to AR6 o.o?

Breeze wrote:

If you want

Breeze wrote:

Alright, RANKED