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Scorpiour

x847606653 wrote:

瞎了,神mapper又开坑,射个
:>
谢谢star,坑了一个多月了总算上架了>.<
JauiPlaY
Hi~
一些建議:

[General]
2個comboburst應分別命名為comboburst-0和comboburst-1 不然你現在comboburst2這張圖片是永遠不會出來的囧
另外這兩張圖片略小
sliderb0和sliderb15是一樣的吧
BG顏色不夠鮮明 我幫你改了一下 用這個比較好

[Easy]
02:02:732 - 白線是kiai 藍線是去kiai吧 正好反了...
沒啥好挑的 不過作為easy略難就是了

[popner's Normal]
00:07:043 - 加note
00:09:918 - ^
01:36:864 (6) - 尾clap
02:02:732 - 其余難度都有的爆星星呢
02:03:091 - 加note
03:04:887 - 最後那一下爆星星呢
combo控制一下 normal不要超過7

[Hard]
01:05:247 (1,2) - 聽上去有點違和
02:02:732 - 白線是kiai 藍線是去kiai吧 正好反了...

[Lunatic]
00:58:511 - 連起來比較好
02:02:732 - 白線是kiai 藍線是去kiai吧 正好反了...

沒了~
Topic Starter
Scorpiour

JauiPlaY wrote:

Hi~
一些建議:

[General]
2個comboburst應分別命名為comboburst-0和comboburst-1 不然你現在comboburst2這張圖片是永遠不會出來的囧
另外這兩張圖片略小 :arrow: fixed!
sliderb0和sliderb15是一樣的吧 :arrow: 这个是为了让sliderb的滚动效果看起来更流畅一些~
BG顏色不夠鮮明 我幫你改了一下 用這個比較好 :arrow: ………………

[Easy]
02:02:732 - 白線是kiai 藍線是去kiai吧 正好反了... :arrow: 这个这个,确实没有反……利用后面红线来中断kiai,白线kiai的话就没有额外的喷泉效果了~
沒啥好挑的 不過作為easy略難就是了

[popner's Normal]
00:07:043 - 加note
00:09:918 - ^
01:36:864 (6) - 尾clap
02:02:732 - 其余難度都有的爆星星呢
02:03:091 - 加note
03:04:887 - 最後那一下爆星星呢
combo控制一下 normal不要超過7

[Hard]
01:05:247 (1,2) - 聽上去有點違和 :arrow: 让我想想怎么改的…………
02:02:732 - 白線是kiai 藍線是去kiai吧 正好反了...

[Lunatic]
00:58:511 - 連起來比較好 :arrow: 这里放慢了能听到中间刚好有个空拍……所以就空了一下……也是为了增加一点难度XDD~~
02:02:732 - 白線是kiai 藍線是去kiai吧 正好反了...

沒了~
谢谢mod和星星~~~~
eikkaleyd

No_Gu wrote:

[潇妹]
00:22:133 (3,4,1,2,3) - 为啥5个一样的音你分了俩K仨D :arrow: 有音调变化啊
00:33:630 (2,3,1,2,3) - 我觉得跟前面dkdk的节奏可能好点。。 :arrow: 这个我也跟音调了
居然不用remap



Download: Jun.A - Ghost Lead (Scorpiour) [eikka's Taiko].osu
Mystica
here comes my mod.

[SB]
00:03:451 可以把fade時間調整長點 個人建議flash應該兩輪
然後開始BG做一遍變化可以滿滿scale就行 畢竟加上sb code話單是現在什麽都不動反而各種
sb/01的scale變化範圍再大點吧

[Easy]
stack好低!雖然不知道現在如何但是所有diff一致如何

[Normal]
01:15:307 (6) - 拉開點保持美觀
02:02:013 (2) - 略微對新手不友好 嘛 不過無所謂了

good map
Nymph
啊 错了
Topic Starter
Scorpiour

Nymph wrote:

啊 错了
围观Nymph卖萌~
Megurine Luka
/QQ

瞎了就看到基片鸭放福利真是不堪入目不愧是gaypieceduck

[General]

*其实你现在这样SB都在osu文档里...osb是可以删掉的._.我不确定每个diff的SB有没有差别,如果没有的话可以把EVENT里的内容删掉然后直接使用osb..减小本来就占不了多少内存的字节数OTL,如果有不同的话就把osb删了吧

其他没啥,就是纯白圈的sliderfollowcircle有点蠢,既然BG里都是蝴蝶干嘛不加只蝴蝶上去之类的...额当我没说

[Easy]

没啥,除了AR感觉高了点以外

[Normal]

瞎了四星半,和之前的难度跨度有点大,降星吧少年,AR和OD都太高了

00:07:223 (7) - NC
00:33:630 (1,2) - 尾巴+clap
01:36:864 (6) - NC
01:41:534 (6,7,8) - 改成折返slider吧,有点难对N来说,顺便NC,12C对N来说实在太长了
02:02:013 (2) - 尾巴+fin
03:00:576 (5) - 不好看啊,改成类似

这样的结吧,呜我只是大致拉了一下

[Hard]

00:22:133 (1) - 中间的点稍微往下拉一点,拉成和后面的2一样的滑条
02:16:384 (2) - 尽量不要和前面的overlap
02:53:031 (1) - NC?

[Lunatic]

00:30:397 (7) - ctrl+R然后往下拉一点和5,6呈三角,然后00:30:397 (7) - 这四个的顺序看着改一下,这样比较顺..
01:00:037 (2,4) - 去掉clap,有点违和
01:40:636 (5) - 移到4的位置,去掉6
02:56:803 (2,2) - 去掉clap


其他没啥O O
eikkaleyd

Megurine Luka wrote:

*其实你现在这样SB都在osu文档里...osb是可以删掉的._.我不确定每个diff的SB有没有差别,如果没有的话可以把EVENT里的内容删掉然后直接使用osb..减小本来就占不了多少内存的字节数OTL,如果有不同的话就把osb删了吧
:arrow: QAQ是我的TAIKO的错
Topic Starter
Scorpiour

Nymph wrote:

General
taiko diff是不是不要用喷星啊 我记得不让用来着 :arrow: 拿掉了~

sliderborder colour似乎也不用加进去taiko吧 :arrow: 手动去掉~

luna比hard难很多啊 其实还可以加个普通向insane(slap
:arrow: 要来一发乜~~

[Easy]
Issues
AR-1?
:arrow: okay~

[popner's Normal]
Issues
00:33:630 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:34:349 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:36:864 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
这几个都重新拽一下结尾的点吧. :arrow: 这三个我给改了~

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:07:223 (7) - Newcombo? 略长了
00:59:499 (1) - 巨nazi:这slider弧度不好看啊 下面那个点再往下点?如果是为了包住的话
01:36:864 (6) - NC?挺长的combo了
01:42:612 (10) - ^


[Hard]
fine.

[Lunatic]
fine.
~~谢谢mod和星星~~~

Mystica wrote:

here comes my mod.

[SB]
00:03:451 可以八fade時間調整長點 個人建議flash應該兩輪
然後開始BG做一遍變化可以滿滿scale就行 畢竟加上sb code話單是現在什麽都不動反而各種
sb/01的scale變化範圍再大點吧
:arrow: 我想想怎么弄的>.<
[Easy]
stack好低!雖然不知道現在如何但是所有diff一致如何 :arrow: 这个stack调高之后会出现奇怪的错位…………

[Normal]
01:15:307 (6) - 拉開點保持美觀
02:02:013 (2) - 略微對新手不友好 嘛 不過無所謂了

good map
感谢MOD的说>.<

Megurine Luka wrote:

/QQ

瞎了就看到基片鸭放福利真是不堪入目不愧是gaypieceduck

[General]

*其实你现在这样SB都在osu文档里...osb是可以删掉的._.我不确定每个diff的SB有没有差别,如果没有的话可以把EVENT里的内容删掉然后直接使用osb..减小本来就占不了多少内存的字节数OTL,如果有不同的话就把osb删了吧

其他没啥,就是纯白圈的sliderfollowcircle有点蠢,既然BG里都是蝴蝶干嘛不加只蝴蝶上去之类的...额当我没说
:arrow: 膜姐说皮肤再弄就太花哨了……于是就用的纯白色……其实我们都爱纯白 (slapped
[Easy]

没啥,除了AR感觉高了点以外 :arrow: fixed~

[Normal]

瞎了四星半,和之前的难度跨度有点大,降星吧少年,AR和OD都太高了

00:07:223 (7) - NC
00:33:630 (1,2) - 尾巴+clap
01:36:864 (6) - NC
01:41:534 (6,7,8) - 改成折返slider吧,有点难对N来说,顺便NC,12C对N来说实在太长了
02:02:013 (2) - 尾巴+fin
03:00:576 (5) - 不好看啊,改成类似

这样的结吧,呜我只是大致拉了一下
:arrow: 音效的部分我给改了,其他的让泡泡自己来弄吧~~
[Hard]

00:22:133 (1) - 中间的点稍微往下拉一点,拉成和后面的2一样的滑条 :arrow: 好~
02:16:384 (2) - 尽量不要和前面的overlap :arrow: 调整了下前面的XD,后面的blank感觉动会变很多……
02:53:031 (1) - NC? :arrow: fixed~

[Lunatic]

00:30:397 (7) - ctrl+R然后往下拉一点和5,6呈三角,然后00:30:397 (7) - 这四个的顺序看着改一下,这样比较顺.. :arrow: 有一点晕……所以索性把这个梗整个改了一下……………改成了一个凶残的左右跳(诶我好像真的坏掉了………
01:00:037 (2,4) - 去掉clap,有点违和 :arrow: fixed~
01:40:636 (5) - 移到4的位置,去掉6 :arrow: 呃。。这里没有动因为我觉得三连还是听着更舒服一点~
02:56:803 (2,2) - 去掉clap :arrow: fixed~~


其他没啥O O
非常感谢mod的说>.<
popner
Fixed some. Ty for mod!

http://puu.sh/tdad
Leorda
Hiii

[popner's Normal]
01:36:864 (1) - Unsnapped tail slider
02:02:013 (4) - Too much repeating slider can makes confusing for beginners


[Hard]
00:54:109 (2) - The head slider is touch the HP Bar
02:18:180 (3) - Move 2nd sliderpoint to 1 grid right for better blanket combo (nazi)


Sorry for my poor mod orz
Topic Starter
Scorpiour

Leorda wrote:

Hiii

[popner's Normal]
01:36:864 (1) - Unsnapped tail slider :arrow: fixed~
02:02:013 (4) - Too much repeating slider can makes confusing for beginners


[Hard]
00:54:109 (2) - The head slider is touch the HP Bar :arrow: adjust~
02:18:180 (3) - Move 2nd sliderpoint to 1 grid right for better blanket combo (nazi) :arrow: okay~


Sorry for my poor mod orz
thx for ur modding ~
wmfchris
- Remove flashy warning on taiko
- I suggest tagging ZUN instead of Zun

KEY
d = red note = note w/o hitsound
k = blue note = whistle/clap
D/K = big ntoe = + finish

[Taiko]
00:13:511 - no 1/4 finishes
00:25:996 - add a k (blue note) here? Sounds you will need some 1/4 in the 1/2 d k streams
00:29:499 - the music sounds only at the white tick so dddkk is not so appropiate, try ddddk
00:31:744 - add a k here
00:55:906 - sounds a bit empty here, add a d
01:42:612 - no 1/4 finishes
01:52:672 - k
02:03:091 - no 1/4 finishes
02:58:240 - kkddkkddk

節奏不錯 至少長串沒亂放
要注意一點就是你有時會在每句之前放2連 不過目前的擺法還是有點生硬 可以更自然和統一一點
另外如在每句之前放5連的話 對應2連的句子 5連應改為4連(去掉第一個note
eikkaleyd

wmfchris wrote:

- Remove flashy warning on taiko
- I suggest tagging ZUN instead of Zun :arrow: 这个得SCO帮改了嗯0.0

KEY
d = red note = note w/o hitsound
k = blue note = whistle/clap
D/K = big ntoe = + finish

[Taiko]
00:13:511 - no 1/4 finishes :arrow: my checking miss, fixed!
00:25:996 - add a k (blue note) here? Sounds you will need some 1/4 in the 1/2 d k streams :arrow: Done
00:29:499 - the music sounds only at the white tick so dddkk is not so appropiate, try ddddk :arrow: Done
00:31:744 - add a k here :arrow: Done
00:55:906 - sounds a bit empty here, add a d :arrow: OK..
01:42:612 - no 1/4 finishes :arrow: fixed
01:52:672 - k :arrow: Done
02:03:091 - no 1/4 finishes :arrow: fixed
02:58:240 - kkddkkddk :arrow: changed><

節奏不錯 至少長串沒亂放
要注意一點就是你有時會在每句之前放2連 不過目前的擺法還是有點生硬 可以更自然和統一一點
另外如在每句之前放5連的話 對應2連的句子 5連應改為4連(去掉第一個note

非常感谢mod,稍微调整了下><
Download: Jun.A - Ghost Lead (Scorpiour) [eikka's Taiko].osu
Tashi_Scarlett[x]
我似乎来得太慢了....被最后音效搞得一点梗都没有...._.~对不起咯

Download: Jun.A - Ghost Lead (Scorpiour) [Tashi].osu
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ Scorpiour ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Setting a AudioLeadIn : 500(now a bit fast with start play).
  2. Volume 100% is too noisy with me,you can try reduce some?

[Lunatic]


  1. OD9? orz that is very hard playing XD.
  2. 01:21:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - Try make more curve.
  3. 02:56:983 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Hard]


  1. 01:11:714 (3) - Try like this rhythm,sound much better.

[popner's Normal]


  1. 00:35:067 (3) - Try make more curve slider.
  2. 00:50:696 - Add note to here,sound much better.
  3. 01:41:175 (5) - Add new combo.
  4. 01:58:421 (4) - ^
  5. 02:37:582 (1) - Move some up this slider.

That's all ~ pretty nice mapset and amazing music ~

Call me back recheck ~
;)
Topic Starter
Scorpiour

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Scorpiour ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Setting a AudioLeadIn : 500(now a bit fast with start play). :arrow:
  2. Volume 100% is too noisy with me,you can try reduce some?
    :arrow: 整体的都做了一些调整~把kiai段分开了

[Lunatic]


  1. OD9? orz that is very hard playing XD. :arrow: LKs姥爷的Timing相当准,而且从之前找很多人来测试的成绩来看应该没有问题 :)
  2. 01:21:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - Try make more curve. :arrow: ok现在应该更均匀平滑了xd
  3. 02:56:983 (1) - Remove new combo. :arrow: 恩okay

[Hard]


  1. 01:11:714 (3) - Try like this rhythm,sound much better.

    :arrow: 抱歉这里没有动,因为01:12:073 - 这个位置上刚好鼓点是一个空拍,然后高音的吉他又连了一个长音下来,所以才决定用一个2/3的长slider来处理的:)

[popner's Normal]


  1. 00:35:067 (3) - Try make more curve slider.
  2. 00:50:696 - Add note to here,sound much better.
  3. 01:41:175 (5) - Add new combo.
  4. 01:58:421 (4) - ^
  5. 02:37:582 (1) - Move some up this slider.

That's all ~ pretty nice mapset and amazing music ~

Call me back recheck ~
;)

非常感谢mod~~

edit : update~
popner

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[popner's Normal]


  1. 00:35:067 (3) - Try make more curve slider. fixed
  2. 00:50:696 - Add note to here,sound much better. hmm...no change, to make consistent
  3. 01:41:175 (5) - Add new combo. no change to make consistent in NC
  4. 01:58:421 (4) - ^ ^
  5. 02:37:582 (1) - Move some up this slider. fixed
http://puu.sh/uDQg
L_P
等等我,有star了不必再star了

easy
00:13:511 (1,2,3) - 感觉这里用长slider更好

hard
01:33:990 (1,2) - 这两个这样排列感觉不美观

lunatic

00:18:361 (2) - 高音的地方用个jump比较有劲 (用note?

00:53:750 (1) - ctrl + R 这个比较好打

02:42:252 (4) - 高音jump?

来看下个图
Kawayi Rika
Recheck ~ everything fine now ~

a32
瞎了 sco神麻婆又泡图
Topic Starter
Scorpiour
谢谢~~~>.<
eikkaleyd
Sakura
[Skin]
Your skinned cursor blends too much with the BG/SB, please replace it (or use the default one).
I'm kinda doubious about the sliderball i brought it up to other BAt/MATs but seems like there's no problem with it.

[Timing]
Tashi's Taiko has an earlier offset, in fact it's better if you make the other diffs match up with Tashi's Taiko's offset since that diff needs that offset due to having hitobjects earlier than the rest.
Topic Starter
Scorpiour

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Skin]
Your skinned cursor blends too much with the BG/SB, please replace it (or use the default one). :arrow: that's okay~~i remove that~~
I'm kinda doubious about the sliderball i brought it up to other BAt/MATs but seems like there's no problem with it.

[Timing]
Tashi's Taiko has an earlier offset, in fact it's better if you make the other diffs match up with Tashi's Taiko's offset since that diff needs that offset due to having hitobjects earlier than the rest.
:arrow: discuss with tashi and finnally we decide to remove extra notes in his taiko diff, so no change on timing, and now it's consistant :)
thank you very much for ur modding >.<
Sakura
Alright, here you go!
Topic Starter
Scorpiour
thank you very much >.<
Kawayi Rika
Yap <3
Topic Starter
Scorpiour
>.<
fanzhen0019
Gratz! >w<
Pokie
\液/ 連rank兩張快黑
spboxer3
哇 連續兩首耶~ 果然是神mapper!!
恭喜摟 :)
YTYuyu
Oh damn 2 straight ranked maps :o. congratz on the rank ;)
Darksonic
Crazy map, good job!
Sakura

Byakugan249 wrote:

Oh damn 2 straight ranked maps :o. congratz on the rank ;)
Oh wow i just realized that, haha! that looks kinda nice xD
Topic Starter
Scorpiour
really thanks to everyone >.<
Akemi_Homura
gratz~! :3
Megurine Luka
瞎/A\ Why hurt my dog eyes
DaxMasterix
2 ranks in 6 hours congratz \o\
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