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Horie Yui - Kitto Koi wo Shiteiru

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Topic Starter
Yuki-kun
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, December 17, 2018 at 11:39:59 PM

Artist: Horie Yui
Title: Kitto Koi wo Shiteiru
Source: Dog Days
Tags: Horie Yui Dog Days
BPM: 120
Filesize: 10250kb
Play Time: 04:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. ~Daisuki~ (3.59 stars, 720 notes)
  2. ~Tomodachi~ (1.72 stars, 261 notes)
Download: Horie Yui - Kitto Koi wo Shiteiru
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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2nd map. :)
Nice song from anime Dogs Day. xD
Horie Yui's vocal is so moe~~~
Alace
I think offset -15ms better
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun

Alace wrote:

I think offset -15ms better
Thanks for helping me ;D
Shana Aisaka
Hi ~ I just wanna help your map ~ :P

[General]
Your Mp3 is too big. Please change it to 192kbps or 128kbps. :3
I think your normal must have 3 star??
I love this song~

[~Tomodachi~]
Overall Difficult - 1

[~Daisuki~]
Approach Rate + 1
Overall Difficult + 1
00:32:906(1) = this part doesn't look good. :( change it to something?
01:53:031(4) = ^ :arrow: http://puu.sh/gnSZ
04:09:878(5) = object isn't snapped yet.

If you want a smaller mp3 here is it. :P :arrow: http://puu.sh/gnYd

PS/ if you want Normal or Easy Diff I can help you make it . >w<" just tell me.
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun

Shana Aisaka wrote:

Hi ~ I just wanna help your map ~ :P

[General]
Your Mp3 is too big. Please change it to 192kbps or 128kbps. :3
I think your normal must have 3 star??
I love this song~

[~Tomodachi~]
Overall Difficult - 1

[~Daisuki~]
Approach Rate + 1
Overall Difficult + 1
00:32:906(1) = this part doesn't look good. :( change it to something?
01:53:031(4) = ^ :arrow: http://puu.sh/gnSZ
04:09:878(5) = object isn't snapped yet.

If you want a smaller mp3 here is it. :P :arrow: http://puu.sh/gnYd

PS/ if you want Normal or Easy Diff I can help you make it . >w<" just tell me.

Thanks for your song and mod. :oops:
Waiting for your diff. :P
kaji_
Hi, I hope this helps! ^.^

[~Tomodachi~]
01:13:531 (1) - no new combo here
01:14:031 (2) - new combo?
02:22:031 (6) - I think it'd be alright for you to remove this note and start the spinner here. (Or maybe extend the spinner so it starts on 02:22:281?)
02:41:531, 02:41:781 (3) - remove finish hitsounds.

[~Daisuki~]
Offset - 31
00:52:406 (7,8) - space these slightly away from the slider?
01:06:131 (1) - finish hitsound here.
02:08:031 (4) - I'm not sure why there's a whistle sound here x3

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun

kjwkjw wrote:

Hi, I hope this helps! ^.^

[~Tomodachi~]
01:13:531 (1) - no new combo here >>> ok
01:14:031 (2) - new combo? >>> ok
02:22:031 (6) - I think it'd be alright for you to remove this note and start the spinner here. (Or maybe extend the spinner so it starts on 02:22:281?) >>> ok
02:41:531, 02:41:781 (3) - remove finish hitsounds. >>> nope

[~Daisuki~]
Offset - 31 >>> nope (since my offset is a only wrong in ~Tomodachi~ map because i just changed mp3 yesterday.)
00:52:406 (7,8) - space these slightly away from the slider? >>> ok
01:06:131 (1) - finish hitsound here. >>> ok
02:08:031 (4) - I'm not sure why there's a whistle sound here x3 >>> ok

Good luck!
Thanks for your help :P
Shana Aisaka
why the file is still big.. :(

mp3
f-INVERSE
[General]
Why is the map so big?
The map has a lot of backgrounds, I consider you standardize the same BG for all difficulties.
Plus, the map doesn't need a storyboard with all the lyrics and whatnot. NO ONE is going to read it.
Too much kiai as well. I consider cutting down on the kiai.

[~Tomodachi~]
No glaring problems.

[~Daisuki~]
00:16:593 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - What is this rubbish? It's confusing. Remap the notes.
00:32:968 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Make an effort to at least move the stream instead of lazily putting it there at the same spot.. It's super hard to see the slider note without the snaking slider effect.
00:56:343 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Please care for your friends who don't have custom skin that makes the 300s and 100s invisible. -_- It's hard enough to see.
01:00:093 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:20:718 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Again, this bloody crap. If you think it's easy, PLEASE, put yourself in others' shoes. It's confusing. I demand that you remap this part.
04:08:968 (3,4) - A little late. move both of these to the red line.
_____________
I'm sorry if I'm a little too harsh, I don't like seeing stuff that is confusing.
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun

Shana Aisaka wrote:

why the file is still big.. :(

mp3
I changed Mp3, Re-download, delete the old file and apply new xD
Do not keep old file.

@f-Inverse: LoL. I'm Re-making SB so ignore it :P
Kiai time for fountain.
Anyways thanks for mod. But i will give you Kds later if it helpful (i'm at school so i can't check right now).
Shana Aisaka
Yahoo~! I'm done!!! >w<"

Please DON'T KUDOS THIS POST!!


Edit : Forgot about the BG. Here and could you re-size it? ><"


Do you like it?? ><?

Download: Horie Yui - Kitto Koi wo Shiteiru (Yuki-kun) [~Shiyawase~].osu
Louis Cyphre
[General]
All red lines must be placed absolutely same in all difficulties.
~Shiyawase~: http://puu.sh/gSBq
~Daisuki: http://puu.sh/gSB0
~Tomodachi~: http://puu.sh/gSBz
I'd like to see same length on all difficulties. Let newbie players enjoy full version of the song.
Source: "Dog Days", without OST single.
Keep consistency in break times. Use them absolutely same in all difficulties.
add Shana Aisaka to tags in all difficulties.
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun
@f-INVERSE: Thanks a lot for modding. Gave kds :P
@Louis Cyphre: LoL, thanks a lot. I dunno that. xD
Shiro
-5 to all offsets sounds good to me. Except for this:

The section here 04:08:362 - should have 119 BPM.
Add a section at 04:10:944 - with 117 BPM.
Add a section at 04:12:216 - with 120 BPM then remove the one at 04:28:230 -
Move the section at 04:44:261 - 10ms later.
Add a section at 04:45:188 - with 110 BPM.

Also 10% volume is way too low (for the last few sections)
Kirino Kousaka
Chao!~ Here's my mod!~ Sorry for some delay ._. (In-game PM request)

  • [General]
  1. There's a little difference with the kiai's of the two diffs. Please make it consistent as much as possible.
  2. The approach circle weird :o though there are maps using this kind of approach circle. meh :|
  3. The sliderfollowcircle that you're using smaller compared to default. Yes the resolutions are identical, but the circle is far smaller.
  4. I don't really know how to mod SB's, but your lyrics appear to a bit late to show up. If you have time to adjust these things, please do.
  5. Add "Millhiore Firianno Biscotti" to the tags? She's the character who's singing of course voiced by Horie Yui.

    [~Tomodachi~]
  6. Why are you using 1/8 BSD here? :o Well it won't affect the diff though, but use at least 1/4. Also this is just a normal diff.
  7. 01:52:343 (2) - The "finish" here sounds really awkward. Remove it.

    [~Daisuki~]
  8. 00:13:331 (4,5) - Remove "whistle".
  9. 00:34:081 (10) - Add NC. If you did, remove NC on the following hitcircle.
  10. 00:54:081 (5) - Add SC1 "finish".
That's all~ Very nice map Yuki-kun~ >w<
I like the song too, it's so relaxing :3
Staaaar!~ >w<
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Chao!~ Here's my mod!~ Sorry for some delay ._. (In-game PM request)

  • [General]
  1. There's a little difference with the kiai's of the two diffs. Please make it consistent as much as possible.
  2. The approach circle weird :o though there are maps using this kind of approach circle. meh :|
  3. The sliderfollowcircle that you're using smaller compared to default. Yes the resolutions are identical, but the circle is far smaller.
  4. I don't really know how to mod SB's, but your lyrics appear to a bit late to show up. If you have time to adjust these things, please do.
  5. Add "Millhiore Firianno Biscotti" to the tags? She's the character who's singing of course voiced by Horie Yui.

    [~Tomodachi~]
  6. Why are you using 1/8 BSD here? :o Well it won't affect the diff though, but use at least 1/4. Also this is just a normal diff.
  7. 01:52:343 (2) - The "finish" here sounds really awkward. Remove it.

    [~Daisuki~]
  8. 00:13:331 (4,5) - Remove "whistle".
  9. 00:34:081 (10) - Add NC. If you did, remove NC on the following hitcircle.
  10. 00:54:081 (5) - Add SC1 "finish".
That's all~ Very nice map Yuki-kun~ >w<
I like the song too, it's so relaxing :3
Staaaar!~ >w<
I forgot to remove 1/8 BSD in normal map xD
it's only used 1/4, when i check SB and offset, forgot to change back xD
kurohana
request from my queue, thanks ^^

[General]
unused bg2 image? delete and then full submit

[~Tomodachi~]
nothing ^^

[~Daisuki~]
00:34:081 (10) - new combo, then remove combo of 00:34:581 (1)
02:42:081 (11) - new combo
04:08:081 (13) - new combo
04:08:362 (1) - remove new combo

that's all
good luck :3 pm me if you want a recheck ^^
popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]

This folder's size is 10.7 MB, which is greater than the allowed size of 10.0 MB without video.
Missing Skin Files: spinner-spin.png
Skin Dimensions approachcircle.png's dimensions must be exactly 128x128 (currently 182x182).
Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections.
Inconsistency in Kiai Times, also kiai times not on downbeat.


[~Tomodachi~]

Fine
Some sliders like 00:02:593 (2) 00:04:593 (1) looks not so good, but it doesn't matter.
02:26:093 (1) - close to spinner end and far from screen center, and it is difficult in Easy.
03:52:593 (1) - ^
04:08:093 (1) - ^
04:28:237 (1) - ^

[~Daisuki~]

Circles: 638 Sliders: 101
There are too many circles in this soft song, and i can't catch the rhythm. Consider replacing some circles by sliders (short or long slider), and follow the vocal, then the map will make more sense. For example:
Add a slider start at 00:18:768 end at 00:19:268
Add a slider start at 00:19:831 end at 00:20:331
Add a slider start at 00:22:081 end at 00:22:331
Add a slider start at 00:22:581 end at 00:23:081
00:24:581 (1) - move this slider to 00:24:831 to fit the vocal.
I think you know how to fix it now.


That's all I can find. GL~
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun
Updated.
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun
Updated sb
Yoru-hide
Hi! from my mod queue~

General:

Use Grid Level 4. Snap Divisor 1/8 ? hm..

~Tomodachi~:

SPOILER
Approach Rate to 4.

04:48:051 - not sure, this kiai time really needed?

~Daisuki~:
SPOILER
00:25:706 - add note.

00:36:581 (1) - old combo.

00:48:956 - add note?

Try this http://puu.sh/JWhU ( 01:12:956 - add note , 01:13:081 (4) - move on 2 ticks right.)

01:22:281 - the break here is 15050 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms, so.. please fix this.

01:53:081 (4) - new combo.
02:09:081 (8) - ^

02:11:331 (6,7,8,9) - follow the Distance Snap, please.

02:58:331 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - as for me, need change, but you can leave it.

03:51:831 (8) - new combo?

04:20:216 (1) - this spinner is 7750 ms long, which is longer than 7500 ms. you must change this or fix,whatever.

04:48:051 - not sure, this kiai time really needed?

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun

Yoru-SAN wrote:

Hi! from my mod queue~

General:

Use Grid Level 4. Snap Divisor 1/8 ? hm..

~Tomodachi~:

SPOILER
Approach Rate to 4.

04:48:051 - not sure, this kiai time really needed?

~Daisuki~:
SPOILER
00:25:706 - add note.

00:36:581 (1) - old combo.

00:48:956 - add note?

Try this http://puu.sh/JWhU ( 01:12:956 - add note , 01:13:081 (4) - move on 2 ticks right.)

01:22:281 - the break here is 15050 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms, so.. please fix this.

01:53:081 (4) - new combo.
02:09:081 (8) - ^

02:11:331 (6,7,8,9) - follow the Distance Snap, please.

02:58:331 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - as for me, need change, but you can leave it.

03:51:831 (8) - new combo?

04:20:216 (1) - this spinner is 7750 ms long, which is longer than 7500 ms. you must change this or fix,whatever.

04:48:051 - not sure, this kiai time really needed?

Good Luck!
2 Kiai Time is for fountain effect.
Thanks for the combo and spinner. I will fix that. :)
Chewin
Hi Yuki-kun, mod request from my modding queue.

[General]
You may want to include an epilepsy warning since there are some flashes in your SB.
I don't like the approach circle you used here s:

[~Tomodachi~]
00:06:081 (3) - Remove finish and use SC1 whistle here to keep consistency also because this finish sounds too loud for me
00:13:581 (3) - 1 grid left
00:12:581 (1,2,3,4,1) - I don't like how you placed these elements, it would be much better if you move them in this way to keep a symmetry: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377760
344,80,12581,5,0
416,144,13081,1,2
416,240,13581,1,0
344,304,14081,1,4
248,320,14581,6,0,B|248:264|192:248,1,90,0|2
104,216,15581,2,0,B|56:216|56:208,2,45,0|0|2
00:16:581 (1) - Ugly slider. You could make it more curved in the center: http://puu.sh/Ktex
00:26:081 (5) - Add new combo and remove it from 00:26:581 (1), it flows better since you used a finish hitsound here and a SB effect
00:33:581 (4) - x:288 y:208 is better so you don't need to use distance snap between 00:33:581 (4,1)
00:44:081 (3) - Move to x:248 y:272 to create a better curve with 00:43:581 (2,4,5)
00:51:081 (2,3) - Bad blanket, use this code. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377770
384,136,51581,2,0,B|392:248|272:264,2,180
00:56:581 (1) - Overlap with 00:54:581 (2)
01:06:081 (1) - Add finish
01:18:081 (2) - Really ugly slider. Fix it plz http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377823
01:54:581 (5) - New combo and remove it from 01:55:081 (1)
04:48:051 / 04:48:119 Kiai Times Not On Downbeat.

[~Daisuki~]
00:21:831 (4,5,6,7) - Move them in this way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377834
344,184,21831,1,0
280,112,22081,1,0
344,184,22331,1,0
392,104,22581,1,0
00:28:581 (1,2,3,4,5) - Select them and move to x:88 y:192 for symmetry
00:29:331 (4) - 1 grid up for symmetry with 00:28:831 (2)
00:30:581 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Select them and move to x:432 y:191 to overlap the 00:30:581 (1,2,3) with 00:29:581 (5)
04:48:051 / 04:48:119 Kiai Times Not On Downbeat.

That's all, I think you need more work on them <w<
Good luck ;3
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun

Chewin wrote:

Hi Yuki-kun, mod request from my modding queue.

[General]
You may want to include an epilepsy warning since there are some flashes in your SB.
I don't like the approach circle you used here s:

[~Tomodachi~]
00:06:081 (3) - Remove finish and use SC1 whistle here to keep consistency also because this finish sounds too loud for me
00:13:581 (3) - 1 grid left
00:12:581 (1,2,3,4,1) - I don't like how you placed these elements, it would be much better if you move them in this way to keep a symmetry: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377760
344,80,12581,5,0
416,144,13081,1,2
416,240,13581,1,0
344,304,14081,1,4
248,320,14581,6,0,B|248:264|192:248,1,90,0|2
104,216,15581,2,0,B|56:216|56:208,2,45,0|0|2
00:16:581 (1) - Ugly slider. You could make it more curved in the center: http://puu.sh/Ktex
00:26:081 (5) - Add new combo and remove it from 00:26:581 (1), it flows better since you used a finish hitsound here and a SB effect
00:33:581 (4) - x:288 y:208 is better so you don't need to use distance snap between 00:33:581 (4,1)
00:44:081 (3) - Move to x:248 y:272 to create a better curve with 00:43:581 (2,4,5)
00:51:081 (2,3) - Bad blanket, use this code. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377770
384,136,51581,2,0,B|392:248|272:264,2,180
00:56:581 (1) - Overlap with 00:54:581 (2)
01:06:081 (1) - Add finish
01:18:081 (2) - Really ugly slider. Fix it plz http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377823
01:54:581 (5) - New combo and remove it from 01:55:081 (1)
04:48:051 / 04:48:119 Kiai Times Not On Downbeat.

[~Daisuki~]
00:21:831 (4,5,6,7) - Move them in this way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377834
344,184,21831,1,0
280,112,22081,1,0
344,184,22331,1,0
392,104,22581,1,0
00:28:581 (1,2,3,4,5) - Select them and move to x:88 y:192 for symmetry
00:29:331 (4) - 1 grid up for symmetry with 00:28:831 (2)
00:30:581 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Select them and move to x:432 y:191 to overlap the 00:30:581 (1,2,3) with 00:29:581 (5)
04:48:051 / 04:48:119 Kiai Times Not On Downbeat.

That's all, I think you need more work on them <w<
Good luck ;3
Thanks a lot <3
kikones34
If you really want to get your map ranked, pay attention to the ranking criteria:

The mapset must have a well-designed spread of difficulties, containing at least an Easy or a Normal difficulty (based on how the map feels): this is so that players of all levels of experience are able to enjoy maps of the songs they love. It's really hard to define how a specific spread could work in a specific song beforehand, but here's a list of things to consider: the difficulties in the mapset must be in a consecutive order and/or with a reasonable gap between them; there should be at least one difficulty around ~2.5/3 star difficulty level; if your mapset has two difficulties, one of them cannot be insane (this basically means that it's highly recommended to have 3 difficulties unless the song itself doesn't allow much variety); if your mapset has three difficulties, one of them should be about ~2.5/3 star difficulty level, and the second should not be Insane; if your map has four or more difficulties, at least two should be something other than Insane. The difficulty level of Taiko-specific difficulties does not follow this."
I may mod and shoot a star at this map someday ;)

P.S.: Good luck!
Natsu
General

Inconsistency in EpilepsyWarning:
- [~Daisuki~] : 1
- [~Tomodachi~] :

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [~Daisuki~] : Shana Aisaka
- [~Tomodachi~] : Horie Yui Dog Days


- [~Daisuki~]
04:47:983 slider should finish here
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun

Natsu wrote:

General

Inconsistency in EpilepsyWarning:
- [~Daisuki~] : 1
- [~Tomodachi~] :

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [~Daisuki~] : Shana Aisaka
- [~Tomodachi~] : Horie Yui Dog Days


- [~Daisuki~]
04:47:983 slider should finish here
Thanks for modding :D
Come[Back]Home
~Tomodachi~

00:37:831 Add circle
00:41:831 ^
02:08:831 ^
03:02:081 Why not a beutifull slider or something? I dont like short Break Times :3

~Daisuki~

Just perfect, love it :3

Sorry if my mod isnt helpful ;.;
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun

Nickname128 wrote:

~Tomodachi~

00:37:831 Add circle
00:41:831 ^
02:08:831 ^
03:02:081 Why not a beutifull slider or something? I dont like short Break Times :3

~Daisuki~

Just perfect, love it :3

Sorry if my mod isnt helpful ;.;
03:02:081 Sound good. I will try to add slider ~ ;)
Momochikun
Crap.. i love her voice xD

Tomodachi~

00:06:081 (3) - Remove finish or reduce it sound
00:20:581 (1) - Bad sliders in my opinion
00:20:581 (1) - Add final hitsound

Daisuki~

00:49:081 (8,9,10) - Add spacing bar before it
02:58:331 (1) - Add whistle
02:59:331 (5) - Add whistle
03:01:331 (4) - Add whistle
04:23:216 (8) - ^

That's all i can found.. good luck :)
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun

Momochikun wrote:

Crap.. i love her voice xD

Tomodachi~

00:06:081 (3) - Remove finish or reduce it sound >> Ok~
00:20:581 (1) - Bad sliders in my opinion >> Ok~
00:20:581 (1) - Add final hitsound >> Nope~

Daisuki~

00:49:081 (8,9,10) - Add spacing bar before it >> Ok~
02:58:331 (1) - Add whistle >> Nope~
02:59:331 (5) - Add whistle >> Nope~
03:01:331 (4) - Add whistle >> Nope~
04:23:216 (8) - ^ >> Nope~

That's all i can found.. good luck :)
Thanks for modding :D
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun
Updated, thanks Shulin for offset suggestion :D
Laurier
mod4mod

Difference in the degree of difficulty is big. please make another diff. (hard or normal)

~Tomodachi~
00:04:095 (4,1) - Replace NC
00:06:095 (3,1) - ^
00:10:095 (4,1) - ^
00:14:095 (4,1) - ^
please keeps this pattern.

00:05:595 (2,3,1,2) - its look to placed at random. make this ? http://puu.sh/1WLEC
00:08:595 (1,2,3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/1WLFb
00:12:595 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:15:595 (2) - delete 2nd waypoint
00:40:595 (4) - like this ? http://puu.sh/1WLGP
00:49:095 (4) - make more smooth slider http://puu.sh/1WLHE
00:55:095 (3) - ^ I like this form
01:12:095 (2,3,4,5,1) - http://puu.sh/1WLJa
01:39:095 (3,4) - make better blanket http://puu.sh/1WLKv
01:50:595 (3) - start at 01:50:345 - ?
02:26:595 (1,2,3) - it overlap to spinner-osu. its good skin. but I can not see it. please move away.
03:00:345 (4) - NC
03:32:095 (1,3) -use same form. http://puu.sh/1WLQ5
03:54:595 (3) - http://puu.sh/1WLQL

some place looks bad. please try to make a more beauty pattern.

~Daisuki~
00:05:845 (6,7,8) - like this ? http://puu.sh/1WLTL I think it makes better flow
00:18:095 (7) - Please put above the stream. http://puu.sh/1WLVV
00:34:595 (2) - keep to spacing x1.0
00:50:095 (3) - like this http://puu.sh/1WLX9
02:40:720 (1) - dont stack on slider end
02:59:095 (4,5) - CTR+G
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun

Laurier wrote:

mod4mod

Difference in the degree of difficulty is big. please make another diff. (hard or normal)

~Tomodachi~
00:04:095 (4,1) - Replace NC >> Ok
00:06:095 (3,1) - ^ >> Ok
00:10:095 (4,1) - ^ >> Ok
00:14:095 (4,1) - ^ >> Ok
please keeps this pattern.

Well, those thing below, almost fix all but in another way xD

00:05:595 (2,3,1,2) - its look to placed at random. make this ? http://puu.sh/1WLEC
00:08:595 (1,2,3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/1WLFb
00:12:595 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:15:595 (2) - delete 2nd waypoint
00:40:595 (4) - like this ? http://puu.sh/1WLGP
00:49:095 (4) - make more smooth slider http://puu.sh/1WLHE
00:55:095 (3) - ^ I like this form
01:12:095 (2,3,4,5,1) - http://puu.sh/1WLJa
01:39:095 (3,4) - make better blanket http://puu.sh/1WLKv
01:50:595 (3) - start at 01:50:345 - ?
02:26:595 (1,2,3) - it overlap to spinner-osu. its good skin. but I can not see it. please move away.
03:00:345 (4) - NC
03:32:095 (1,3) -use same form. http://puu.sh/1WLQ5
03:54:595 (3) - http://puu.sh/1WLQL

some place looks bad. please try to make a more beauty pattern.

~Daisuki~
00:05:845 (6,7,8) - like this ? http://puu.sh/1WLTL I think it makes better flow >> Ok
00:18:095 (7) - Please put above the stream. http://puu.sh/1WLVV >> Ok
00:34:595 (2) - keep to spacing x1.0 >> Ok
00:50:095 (3) - like this http://puu.sh/1WLX9 >> ?
02:40:720 (1) - dont stack on slider end
02:59:095 (4,5) - CTR+G >> Ok


Thanks for mod.
NewRulerNA
hi
found an issue. you must fix it.

[General]
  1. "soft-slidertick.wav" and "soft-sliderslide.wav" are completely silent. you must remove one.

    Ranking Criteria wrote:

    Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible. These provide feedback for the player, and having them silent in a rhythm game doesn't make much sense. If you don't like the default sounds, then find replacements rather than silencing notes. You can use hitsounds from the Custom Hitsound Library or easily find others online. Lowering the volume of a few notes to provide a dampened effect is usually fine, but complete silence is always unacceptable. The end of a spinner (or even the entire spinner) the sliding sound of a slider, and the end of a slider can be silent, but only do it if it makes sense. Finally, you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together.
gl
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi
found an issue. you must fix it.

[General]
  1. "soft-slidertick.wav" and "soft-sliderslide.wav" are completely silent. you must remove one.

    Ranking Criteria wrote:

    Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible. These provide feedback for the player, and having them silent in a rhythm game doesn't make much sense. If you don't like the default sounds, then find replacements rather than silencing notes. You can use hitsounds from the Custom Hitsound Library or easily find others online. Lowering the volume of a few notes to provide a dampened effect is usually fine, but complete silence is always unacceptable. The end of a spinner (or even the entire spinner) the sliding sound of a slider, and the end of a slider can be silent, but only do it if it makes sense. Finally, you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together.
gl
LoL
Thanks xD
I didn't notice that xD
No_Gu
From my queue

[General/All diffs]
Artist:堀江由衣
Title:きっと恋をしている
I would change N:C1 to S:C1 and add normal-hitnormal as a clap.your hitsound is too little and in taiko mode there are nearly all don.
00:01:095 - 00:14:595 maybe remove this kiai time?..you have too many kiai times in this diff.If you don't want to,at least end it at 00:14:095

[Tomotachi]
00:18:595 (1,2,3,4,1) - make them symmetrical
00:22:095 (2) - spacing
00:24:595 (4) - ^
00:34:095 (1) - ^
please control all spacing the same in easy/normal diffs..unless it's really need to be changed
00:43:595 (2,3,4,5) - try to make them a beautiful shape
00:49:095 (4) - why not use a 2/1 slider directly?
00:58:095 (4,1) - remove nc on 1 and add it to 4
01:03:095 (1,2) - odd shapes http://www..
01:12:095 (2,3,4,5,1) - still..looks not so beautiful
01:46:095 (1,2,3,4,5) - check these spacing
01:50:095 (2,3) - if you want to follow vocal,at least this pattern http://puu.sh/1Ykt6
02:21:595 (6) - spacing
02:22:095 (1,1) - too close after spinner
02:31:595 (2,3,4,5,6) - make them a better pentagram?
03:00:345 (1,2) - don't let them overlapped x.x
03:07:845 (2,3,1,2) - sounds catched nothing..
03:33:595 (2) - spacing
03:48:095 (1,1) - too close after spinner
04:08:115 (1) - finish
04:20:220 (1,1) - too close after spinner
04:32:220 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - make them symmetrical
please use DS anytime then you're making easy/normal...

[Daisuki]
after a one-time view..I'm sorry to say this diff may be not so good to be ranked imo(just my own opinion
some tips for you If you want to have a remap
  1. avoid using too many circles at a time..just something like 00:04:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:21:345 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ...thogh don't want to say..I think you can't make beautiful shapes of circles for now.using circles + sliders regularly will let your map look more neat
  2. 00:10:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - like this pattern.I will map a triangle for each.that will be more beautiful
  3. try not to use too many speed-changes if It doesn't really require it.like 00:42:095 (1) - 00:51:845 (6) - ,players may get confused
  4. 02:10:845 (4,5,1,2,3) - in this pattern.I think you don't need to limit yourself.it's your hardest diff so don't need to put too easy patterns in it
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun

No_Gu wrote:

From my queue

[General/All diffs]
Artist:堀江由衣
Title:きっと恋をしている
I would change N:C1 to S:C1 and add normal-hitnormal as a clap.your hitsound is too little and in taiko mode there are nearly all don.
00:01:095 - 00:14:595 maybe remove this kiai time?..you have too many kiai times in this diff.If you don't want to,at least end it at 00:14:095

[Tomotachi]
00:18:595 (1,2,3,4,1) - make them symmetrical
00:22:095 (2) - spacing
00:24:595 (4) - ^
00:34:095 (1) - ^
please control all spacing the same in easy/normal diffs..unless it's really need to be changed
00:43:595 (2,3,4,5) - try to make them a beautiful shape
00:49:095 (4) - why not use a 2/1 slider directly?
00:58:095 (4,1) - remove nc on 1 and add it to 4
01:03:095 (1,2) - odd shapes http://www..
01:12:095 (2,3,4,5,1) - still..looks not so beautiful
01:46:095 (1,2,3,4,5) - check these spacing
01:50:095 (2,3) - if you want to follow vocal,at least this pattern http://puu.sh/1Ykt6
02:21:595 (6) - spacing
02:22:095 (1,1) - too close after spinner
02:31:595 (2,3,4,5,6) - make them a better pentagram?
03:00:345 (1,2) - don't let them overlapped x.x
03:07:845 (2,3,1,2) - sounds catched nothing..
03:33:595 (2) - spacing
03:48:095 (1,1) - too close after spinner
04:08:115 (1) - finish
04:20:220 (1,1) - too close after spinner
04:32:220 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - make them symmetrical
please use DS anytime then you're making easy/normal...

[Daisuki]
after a one-time view..I'm sorry to say this diff may be not so good to be ranked imo(just my own opinion
some tips for you If you want to have a remap
  1. avoid using too many circles at a time..just something like 00:04:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:21:345 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ...thogh don't want to say..I think you can't make beautiful shapes of circles for now.using circles + sliders regularly will let your map look more neat
  2. 00:10:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - like this pattern.I will map a triangle for each.that will be more beautiful
  3. try not to use too many speed-changes if It doesn't really require it.like 00:42:095 (1) - 00:51:845 (6) - ,players may get confused
  4. 02:10:845 (4,5,1,2,3) - in this pattern.I think you don't need to limit yourself.it's your hardest diff so don't need to put too easy patterns in it

I won't tell you where to fix it because i will re-map , since my skill is improve a bit (LoLoLoLoL) xD
Thanks for the mod xD
Lally
Hi from Andrea's and Lally's Mod4Mod Queue ♥
[General]
Folder song is fine
[Tomodachi]


  • Spacing issues:
    I don't wanna be nazi but i valutate a from 0.4 a spacing issues :
  1. 00:07:595 (4,1) - spacing
  2. 00:13:595 (3,1) - spacing
  3. 00:14:595 (2,3,4) - spacing
  4. 00:20:595 (1,2) - spacing
  5. 00:23:095 (2,3) - spacing
    ehm... i don't wanna continue to mention them all, so please check alone all the spacing and make sure that the next and prev objects are 1.1 distant.
  6. 00:40:595 (4,1) - this flow really bad :c why don't you try something like:
  7. 00:51:095 (2,3) - try something like this: it will flow better a blanket
  8. 01:03:095 (5,6) - why so ugly slider make they cuter like :
  9. 02:42:095 - this finish sound to loud >.< i think 40% volume is better
  10. 04:42:220 (3) - you can make it cuter with the new 3 point formula
[Daisuki]
  1. 00:23:499 - Unsnapped inherited timing point
  2. well i don't have much to say about this diff, please check alone spacing here, because really in some points the incostency is to big
  3. i think at the beginning you should remove some streams, because for a such soft song you did a a little bit overmapped Hard.. it seems more like a insane and made your mapset not well-balanced, try to do some patter simplier :X

Get more mods and Andrea will mod it too, i think this map is not ready yet >.<
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun

Lally wrote:

Hi from Andrea's and Lally's Mod4Mod Queue ♥
[General]
Folder song is fine
[Tomodachi]


  • Spacing issues:
    I don't wanna be nazi but i valutate a from 0.4 a spacing issues :
  1. 00:07:595 (4,1) - spacing
  2. 00:13:595 (3,1) - spacing
  3. 00:14:595 (2,3,4) - spacing
  4. 00:20:595 (1,2) - spacing
  5. 00:23:095 (2,3) - spacing
    ehm... i don't wanna continue to mention them all, so please check alone all the spacing and make sure that the next and prev objects are 1.1 distant.
  6. 00:40:595 (4,1) - this flow really bad :c why don't you try something like:
  7. 00:51:095 (2,3) - try something like this: it will flow better a blanket
  8. 01:03:095 (5,6) - why so ugly slider make they cuter like :
  9. 02:42:095 - this finish sound to loud >.< i think 40% volume is better
  10. 04:42:220 (3) - you can make it cuter with the new 3 point formula
[Daisuki]
  1. 00:23:499 - Unsnapped inherited timing point
  2. well i don't have much to say about this diff, please check alone spacing here, because really in some points the incostency is to big
  3. i think at the beginning you should remove some streams, because for a such soft song you did a a little bit overmapped Hard.. it seems more like a insane and made your mapset not well-balanced, try to do some patter simplier :X

Get more mods and Andrea will mod it too, i think this map is not ready yet >.<
I'm re-mapping, since i just found another way to use more hitsound better.
Thanks for the mod xD
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun
Re-mapped done~
Waiting for mod~ xD
Irreversible
HEWOO O/ lol

xD

You helped me a lot, I'M F_ GONNA HELP YOU NOW! o:

Letse start!

-suddenly decided for irc mod-

SPOILER
16:57 Irreversible: what about irc mod?
16:58 Yuki-kun: i didn't use irc
16:58 Yuki-kun: xD
16:58 Irreversible: so we can talk abit about it~
16:58 Irreversible: what
16:58 Irreversible: no like
16:58 Irreversible: modding in this chat
16:58 Irreversible: and then i savelog, and post it
16:58 Yuki-kun: oh ok
16:58 Irreversible: ok
16:58 Irreversible: okay :D
16:58 Yuki-kun: i thought you talking about using irc soft
16:58 Yuki-kun: xD
16:58 Irreversible: 5 minutes op
16:58 Irreversible: ok lets start xD
16:58 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/131266 Horie Yui - Kitto Koi wo Shiteiru [~Tomodachi~]]
16:59 Irreversible: 00:16:595 (4) - this is confusing to newbies D:
17:00 Irreversible: 00:20:595 (1) - you could split this into a little slider and a circle.. it fits the rythm that you mapped more
17:00 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/20nSu like this
17:01 Irreversible: tell me if you don't agree
17:02 Yuki-kun: please wait
17:02 Yuki-kun: my browser is a bit slow
17:02 Yuki-kun: xD
17:02 Irreversible: oh ok
17:02 Yuki-kun: ok so
17:02 Yuki-kun: 00:16:595 (4) -
17:02 Yuki-kun: i prefer this than
17:03 Yuki-kun: 00:20:595 (1) -
17:03 Yuki-kun: ok changed
17:03 Irreversible: 00:33:595 (4) -
17:03 Irreversible: place this
17:03 Irreversible: straight under 00:32:095 (3) -
17:03 Irreversible: because of the flow
17:04 Irreversible: 00:43:095 (2) - http://puu.sh/20nYx
17:04 Irreversible: wait no this doesn't fit with 00:43:095 (2,3,4,5,6) -
17:05 Irreversible: tell me if i'm too confusing or something xD
17:05 Yuki-kun: don't worry
17:05 Yuki-kun: i will choose which part should i change
17:05 Irreversible: 00:41:595 (1) - put this like in the middle
17:05 Yuki-kun: and if i don't tell anything, that's mean i agree to change
17:06 Irreversible: 00:43:095 (2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/20o12
17:06 Irreversible: 00:45:595 (1) - again this is confusing to newbs
17:06 Irreversible: question: do you need slider ticks in your mapset? if not, put a silent slidertick as .wav in it
17:07 Irreversible: 01:01:095 (4) - confusing
17:07 Yuki-kun: can't
17:07 Irreversible: 01:06:595 (2) - let this look same like 01:04:595 (2) -
17:07 Irreversible: why?
17:07 Yuki-kun: ranking criteria
17:07 Irreversible: o.o
17:07 Yuki-kun: do not allow
17:07 Yuki-kun: put the same slidertick and slider-slide
17:07 Irreversible: oh
17:07 Yuki-kun: in silence for all
17:07 Yuki-kun: xD
17:07 Irreversible: ok sliderslide is better ^^
17:08 Irreversible: 01:17:095 (5,6) - i can feel the slider here O__O
17:08 Yuki-kun: wait
17:08 Yuki-kun: 00:43:095 (2,3,4,5,6) -
17:08 Irreversible: 01:21:095 (4) - i know i said it's confusing and stuff but i kinda want one more reverse here
17:08 Yuki-kun: i like this part than
17:08 Irreversible: well i just don't like "2" there
17:09 Irreversible: but you can leave it
17:09 Yuki-kun: 01:21:095 (4) -
17:09 Yuki-kun: one more repeat will make it a bit hard for newbie
17:10 Irreversible: well you know, its like before the break
17:10 Irreversible: like a good finish
17:10 Irreversible: xD
17:10 Yuki-kun: hmm
17:10 Irreversible: 01:43:095 (2) - the first point to the red point is not straight, FIX IT loljk xD
17:10 Yuki-kun: ok i will think about it later
17:10 Irreversible: ok :D
17:11 Irreversible: 01:46:595 (5) - nc
17:11 Irreversible: 01:48:095 (1) - no nc
17:12 Irreversible: 02:28:095 (4) - same as always
17:12 Irreversible: 02:38:095 (1) - but leave this, i think its ok
17:13 Yuki-kun: 02:38:095 (1) -
17:13 Yuki-kun: i will leave this part
17:13 Yuki-kun: but
17:13 Yuki-kun: 02:28:095 (4) -
17:13 Yuki-kun: ok i think i can change this
17:14 Irreversible: 02:59:595 (3) - make this one straight
17:14 Irreversible: like straight under 2
17:15 Irreversible: 03:15:935 - spinner? o.o
17:15 Irreversible: 03:27:345 (3) - 1 reverse away
17:15 Yuki-kun: wait
17:15 Yuki-kun: spinner where?
17:15 Irreversible: like in the break when she says AHHHH
17:16 Irreversible: 04:02:595 (4) - stack under 2
17:16 Irreversible: 04:20:220 (1) - okay i don't think that's a good idea xDD
17:16 Irreversible: 04:42:220 (3) - press shift to place it straight to 2
17:17 Yuki-kun: 03:27:345 (3) -
17:17 Yuki-kun: this is better
17:17 Yuki-kun: if i put a note, it's become hard to see
17:17 Irreversible: oh.. i didn't see, sorry xD
17:17 Irreversible: 04:30:220 (4) - i like that :3
17:17 Irreversible: well that's fairly everything i can see o.o
17:18 Irreversible: no wait: this slider 04:46:415 (4) - ends at 04:47:778 - and put a note at 04:48:051 (5) -
17:19 Yuki-kun: 04:20:220 (1) -
17:19 Yuki-kun: i like this spinner
17:19 Yuki-kun: 04:46:415 (4) -
17:20 Yuki-kun: this no prob with me
17:20 Irreversible: its not a prob
17:20 Yuki-kun: i followed vocal in this part
17:20 Irreversible: its just.. A FINSIH
17:20 Irreversible: xD
17:20 Irreversible: well idk o,o
17:21 Irreversible: well let's go on with your insane? :D
17:21 Yuki-kun: wait 3 min please
17:21 Irreversible: okies
17:21 Yuki-kun: i need to check error in your mod
17:21 Yuki-kun: xD
17:21 Irreversible: D; what errors! xDD
17:21 Irreversible: loljk
17:22 Yuki-kun: no, i'm mean
17:22 Yuki-kun: my part which bad
17:22 Yuki-kun: not your fault in mod
17:22 Yuki-kun: xD
17:22 Irreversible: ah ~
17:22 Irreversible: tyt
17:22 Yuki-kun: like this
17:22 Yuki-kun: 00:41:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
17:22 Yuki-kun: ok i agreed it's a bit annoy
17:22 Yuki-kun: but i want to keep
17:23 Yuki-kun: 00:43:095 (2,3,4,5,6) -
17:23 Yuki-kun: this
17:23 Yuki-kun: so ok, i agreed and change to another way
17:24 Irreversible: okay :D
17:26 Irreversible: should we go on?
17:27 Yuki-kun: ok done~
17:27 Yuki-kun: :D
17:27 Irreversible: :D
17:27 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/131265 Horie Yui - Kitto Koi wo Shiteiru [~Daisuki~]]
17:28 Irreversible: 00:09:470 (5) - don't know if i would do that, but a triplet would fit xDD
17:28 Irreversible: (add a circle)
17:28 Irreversible: 00:18:095 (1) - that's not readabe
17:29 Yuki-kun: you mean
17:29 Yuki-kun: 00:09:595 (5) -
17:29 Yuki-kun: add a circle in
17:29 Yuki-kun: 00:09:720
17:29 Irreversible: no
17:29 Irreversible: 00:28:720 - stack the slider end with 5
17:30 Yuki-kun: wait
17:30 Yuki-kun: back to this
17:30 Yuki-kun: 00:09:595 (5) -
17:30 Yuki-kun: what do you mean be add a circle?
17:30 Yuki-kun: xD
17:30 Irreversible: like.. add a circle
17:30 Irreversible: xDDDD
17:30 Irreversible: ohh
17:30 Irreversible: 00:09:470 - here
17:30 Irreversible: xDD
17:31 Yuki-kun: stream 3?
17:31 Irreversible: yeah
17:31 Yuki-kun: ok that's not fit for me, so ignore it xD
17:31 Irreversible: kk
17:31 Irreversible: xDDD
17:31 Yuki-kun: we can go on
17:31 Yuki-kun: 00:09:595 (5) -
17:31 Irreversible: XD
17:31 Yuki-kun: this is insane map, some part like this is not big problem
17:32 Irreversible: i prefer something like this: 00:37:345 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/20oCs (4 is placed at 00:37:845 (4) - )
17:33 Irreversible: 00:54:845 (1) - why new combo?
17:33 Irreversible: 01:19:845 (5) - you have to put that out.. i guess (same problem like i had)
17:34 Irreversible: 01:20:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - make like a nice half-circle o,o
17:35 Irreversible: LET THE STREAM GO ON 01:53:970 (8) - add a circle
17:35 Irreversible: 01:57:595 (6,1) - this jump doesn't fit
17:36 Irreversible: 02:17:845 (1) - btw i would use more things like this to make everything funnier
17:36 Irreversible: 02:37:470 (6) - add a circle
17:36 Irreversible: 03:01:345 (4) - nc
17:37 Yuki-kun: q02:37:595 (6) -
17:37 Yuki-kun: this is ok with me
17:37 Yuki-kun: 03:01:345 (1) -
17:37 Yuki-kun: 03:01:345 (4) -
17:37 Yuki-kun: ok changed combo
17:37 Irreversible: 03:26:845 (1,2) - make like a little reverse slider (like 02:17:845 (1) )
17:37 Yuki-kun: 01:57:595 (6,1) -
17:37 Yuki-kun: this is fine
17:38 Irreversible: 03:30:845 (5) - ^
17:38 Irreversible: okay :d btw i really love the hitsounds
17:39 Irreversible: 03:51:845 (1) - this is weird
17:39 Yuki-kun: well
17:39 Yuki-kun: 03:30:845 (5) -
17:39 Yuki-kun: this is ok
17:39 Yuki-kun: 03:51:845 (1) -
17:39 Yuki-kun: ok will change
17:39 Irreversible: 04:28:220 (1) - this is an evil combo breaker
17:40 Irreversible: 04:40:470 (5) - o__o' why? xD
17:40 Yuki-kun: ok will change
17:40 Yuki-kun: i hate that too but seem like i made a mistake
17:40 Yuki-kun: xD
17:40 Yuki-kun: so i put it by accident
17:40 Yuki-kun: xD
17:40 Irreversible: i know that feeling
17:40 Irreversible: xD
17:40 Irreversible: well thats it :D
17:41 Yuki-kun: ok thanks :D
17:41 Yuki-kun: checking for some part
17:41 Irreversible: ok :D i post it


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SuperMoutarde
Hi!

m4m for your modding queue ^^

[Skin]

Your custom hitcircle doesnt look too good imo. With the high transparency, the image can barely be seen. Either remove the background image of the hitcircle, or change something to make it more visible.

[Timing]

Timing is wrong for the outro, you can see your notes are not correctly snapped. Try this instead:
  1. Offset 284,271: BPM 98,00
  2. Offset 286,413: BPM 110,00
You should ask for someone else to double check on this, though, as I might be slightly wrong but this works better than what you had before.

[Tomodachi]
  1. 00:49:095 (4) - try to blanket around 00:50:595 (1)
  2. 01:02:595 (5,1) - stack with 01:00:595 (3). Don't forget to re-stack 01:06:095 (1) as well
  3. 01:18:095 (1) - maybe blanket around 01:17:095 (5) ?
  4. 03:31:095 (5) - curve more to blanket around the end of 03:30:095 (4)
[Daisuki]

  1. 00:09:845 (6) - try to avoid overlapping with 00:08:845 (2). There are A LOT of these in the map so I'm not gonna quote em all one by one, but I think this kind of overlapping makes the map look really messy, I think there is a lot of work to be done in order to fix this issue
  2. 00:13:095 (3) - stack perfectly with 00:12:095 (3)

That's it for me! Good luck with this.

Here's my map for m4m: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/78004
Haya
Hey! From your modding queue :3

[General]
Your sliderball could be hard to see for some players

[~Tomodachi~]
Try using more Hitsounds. The Difficulty sounds pretty boring to me due to almost no hitsounds.
00:31:095 (1) - Confusing for new players
00:38:095 (1) - Looks better on the Y Axis
00:40:595 (4) - ^
00:41:595 (1) - Symmetrically please
00:43:095 (3,4,5,6,7) - Don't use jumps in an Easy Difficulty
00:49:095 (4) - Slider looks so pointy ...
00:55:095 (3) - Symm. to the X Axis
01:04:595 (2) - Do this one more round please
01:21:095 (4,5) - Confusing
01:53:595 (4) - NC
01:55:095 (1) - Remove NC
03:06:345 (1) - Sounds weird
03:36:595 (2) - Distance Snap
03:46:095 (1,2) - Might be confusing
03:52:595 (1,2,3) - Looks weird. Make it perfectly symmetric please.
04:20:220 (1) - Shorten the slider. You could make it start here 04:24:220 -
04:30:220 (4) - Not symmetric
04:44:271 - From here on your timing is f*cked up. Use the Timing points from "SuperMoutarde".

[~Daisuki~]
Beginning has nice Hitsounds, but that impression fades away with the map getting nearer to the end. Please use Hitsounds throughout the whole map so it doesn't sound boring.
00:03:595 (2) - NC
00:17:345 (2) - Delete
00:18:095 (1) - Distance Snap
00:24:595 (1) - Do it like this: http://puu.sh/215d6
00:26:345 - Add a note
00:26:845 - ^
00:27:345 - ^
00:28:345 - ^
00:32:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I like this stream! Looks good :)
01:19:845 (5) - Suddenly so slow...
01:51:845 (1) - Remove NC
01:55:845 (6) - NC
01:56:095 (1) - Remove NC
02:01:845 (4) - NC
02:02:095 (1) - Remove NC
02:37:845 (1,2,3) - Try doing this symmetrical
03:54:595 (1,2) - Replace it by a slider
04:27:345 (6) - Can be confusing
04:45:801 (4,5) - Not snapped

That's all from me :D
Good luck!~ :3
Oyatsu
~Tomodachi~
First, 01:06:595 (2,3) - I think the vocal longs whole sentence, If so, It will difficult to can play normally. Let you to slider 01:06:595 (2) - continue to 01:08:095 (3).
01:14:595 (2,3) - Also similar
01:54:595 (5) - it can down afew to proportionate between 01:53:595 (4) - and 01:55:095 (1) -
02:01:095 (1,2) - they can as last combo. 02:02:095 (3) - to it is combo after that ( All to can play as beat and see easily)
02:22:095 (1) - This spin can short 1 tick to add 1 circle ( as vocal)
After 03:13:345 (5) - you should add 1 slider arc to spin ( to residual beat then suddenly spin will cause confusion)
03:23:095 (1) - At first ( no repeat slider) I think you add a circle as last combo and keep white slider when repeat.
~Daisuki~
After 03:01:845 (3) - you should add 1 spin to 03:04:595 (1)
The break after that is also so, it change spin


okays? Others is too great! And Skin is quite beautiful. Good ranked soon!
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun

Loki-san wrote:

~Tomodachi~
First, 01:06:595 (2,3) - I think the vocal longs whole sentence, If so, It will difficult to can play normally. Let you to slider 01:06:595 (2) - continue to 01:08:095 (3).
01:14:595 (2,3) - Also similar
01:54:595 (5) - it can down afew to proportionate between 01:53:595 (4) - and 01:55:095 (1) -
02:01:095 (1,2) - they can as last combo. 02:02:095 (3) - to it is combo after that ( All to can play as beat and see easily)
02:22:095 (1) - This spin can short 1 tick to add 1 circle ( as vocal)
After 03:13:345 (5) - you should add 1 slider arc to spin ( to residual beat then suddenly spin will cause confusion)
03:23:095 (1) - At first ( no repeat slider) I think you add a circle as last combo and keep white slider when repeat.
~Daisuki~
After 03:01:845 (3) - you should add 1 spin to 03:04:595 (1)
The break after that is also so, it change spin


okays? Others is too great! And Skin is quite beautiful. Good ranked soon!
I'm on my way to re-map xD.
Anw thanks for modding. :p
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