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00:51:662 - until 00:58:585 - and 02:05:508 - until 02:12:431 - you repeat the same rhythm many times when there are changes in the music making this part relatively boring and repetitive.
00:53:739 - here is an instrument sound that you seek to prioritize as seen in 00:52:354 - and 00:56:046 - but it is completely ignored by the use of two 1/1+circle slider which loses contrast and emphasis for them

my suggestion is to vary the pace a little in this part since the red ticks are important here
for example: https://prnt.sc/Bna1mEkEvFVT that way you would highlight all the loud sounds like 00:51:893 -, 00:53:508 - and 00:53:739 -, and this can be applied in 00:55:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 02:05:508 - .

if you wanted to somehow get the snare sound at 00:53:970 -, you can turn 00:53:739 - into 1/2 reverse slider instead 1/1 slider =)

try to spread the notes more around the screen, that way you vary the movements around the map, actually you concentrate the notes to the middle of the screen which makes it discouraging https://prnt.sc/5ovWIv8R6Mzq

i also noticed that certain movements are repetitive for different beats of the music which makes the emphasis very weak/bad, for example: 00:14:439 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) -
00:14:439 (1,2,3) - vs 00:15:939 (2,3,4) -, here the vocals and beats are stronger but having them represented in the same way doesn't bring a contrast that it should here

another situation is that most of the map there are sounds in the blue ticks but suddenly you completely ignore it causing the map to be inconsistent, for example: 00:48:725 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1) - being that 00:49:903 - and 00:50:117 - are not mapped is strange for the patterns you follow across the map
00:21:617 -, 00:22:046 -, 00:22:475 -, etc. same ^

i understand that you are a beginner mapper so I have given you tips on how you can adjust your rhythm and note control around the map, i could cite a lot of situations similar to those listed above around the map but I don't think it would help much, so try to analyze and apply it to similar situations that occur on the map.

Hope that helps a bit =)

:3

avoid using combo color with less 50 luminosity or lower according to the guideline https://prnt.sc/LME7rQ3KogQX

remove the combo color 2 or 3 because the shade of red between them is very similar, i suggest using some colors that match this background like:

[Colours]
Combo1 : 170,0,0
Combo2 : 88,0,176
Combo3 : 255,0,0
Combo4 : 249,0,124