I'm assuming from 02:24:249 - to 02:25:634 -
you were following the kicks that is complimenting the voice that is why the kicks does not continue but

I think adding notes here 02:25:749 - and 02:25:980 - won't hurt as much since there is also a sound such as piano and drum that can compliment even a single note

the reason why I suggested this is so that the consistency of the dense stairs can still be continued and not just be stopped midway

00:35:672 - kinda like to add one more note here cause I think it kinda looks too empty, just a small suggestion since there is a kick

01:17:424 (77424|5,77509|3,77595|1) - this pattern is a bit overused and has been done twice before this part so suggest is to ctrl + h this and then

01:17:680 (77680|5,77808|0,77937|5) - ctrl + h this notes then move the 2 column |2| notes and move it to the |3| column

00:21:013 (21013|5) - this note with the mini jack on this notes 00:21:142 (21142|5,21206|3,21270|1) - may seem like a good idea at first but I think it is quiet awkward especially this is still the easiest diff, better to introduce the mini jack later on so

ctrl + h all of this notes 01:17:424 (77424|5,77509|3,77595|1,77680|5,77808|0,77937|5) -

from 00:37:424 - to 00:41:270 -
a bit to awkward for me on the right hand so
so here is my suggestion to make things consistent

00:37:424 (37424|6,37424|4) - move this notes 2 steps on the left ( so that will be one note at |3| and |5| ) so that we can continue the jack notes at the column |6|

move this note 00:37:616 (37616|2) - at the |5| column
move this note 00:37:808 (37808|6) - at the |3| column

then at this point 00:37:937 - towards 00:41:270 -
just copy paste your pattern from 00:33:834 - to 00:37:167 - and then ctrl + h so that it is on the otherside :DD

my reasoning for this suggestion is that the one that you did was quite awkward for the right hand, better to make it simple, less is more

following this format
|1|2|3|4|

Move this note 00:10:519 (10519|1) - to |3|
Move this note 00:10:697 (10697|3) - to |2|
Move this note 00:10:874 (10874|2) - to |4|

Makes the pattern a lot more comfortable to play with

00:05:194 - - 00:08:744 -

this parts seems to be a bit awkward and it doesn't seem to be comfortable on the right fingers because

this note 00:05:194 (5194|3) - to 00:05:549 (5549|1) - is awkward as it is and to transition it to another pattern would make the right fingers a bit uncomfy

here is my suggested pattern
00:05:194 - to 00:07:679 -
https://i.imgur.com/6aGNrFw.png

00:07:324 - to 00:08:744 -
https://i.imgur.com/JudSsiD.png

This is in order so I hope it's not that confusing
for reference the left part chart is the one that I suggest and the right part chart is the one you did originally

I've check the other difficulties and 00:23:070 - to 00:29:790 -
and 01:24:510 - to 01:32:190 -

Dark2442's Hyper and this difficulty seems to have thesame notes if I am not mistaken xD

I hope you can add notes on those times so that it can amplify the difficulty more rather than just having thesame notes before on the less harder difficulty.

Here is my suggestion for 00:23:070 to 00:29:790
The following will be in order :))
https://i.imgur.com/fgfrh4l.png
https://i.imgur.com/hMnSgH7.png
https://i.imgur.com/RzLa337.png
https://i.imgur.com/eC7Btms.png
https://i.imgur.com/R3d9WbJ.png
https://i.imgur.com/JFpVpiy.png
https://i.imgur.com/tcd3Ox8.png
https://i.imgur.com/BEYyh2G.png

00:17:356 (17356|2,17556|2,17756|2,17856|1) -
fix
also 00:18:956 (18956|3,19156|3,19356|3) -
fix