00:14:212 (5,6,7,8) - this 1/3 pattern is unexpected and is spaced the same as 1/4 patterns later in the map, maybe make it wiggly or change the shape?
03:53:030 (5) - remove so its like 03:53:630 (3,4) - to reduce density and emphasise the sound on 03:53:180 (1) -
03:31:430 (5,1) - 03:32:630 (5,1) - i wouldn't put jumps here because the rhythm density is already hard enough
02:35:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - this section has both many more jumps and higher rhythm density than any part of the map until this point. 02:35:780 (5,6,1) - 02:39:680 (3,1) - and 02:40:580 (4,5,1) - spacing should be toned down so it isn't confused with a 1/1 spacing. 02:38:030 (3) - could also be turned into a 1/1 slider with a note placed at 02:38:480 and the note 02:38:630 (4) - removed to lower rhythm density (song also stops some background instrument here).