nope, the connection with the 1/4 and 1/8 is not the best, you need to look for the pattern itself and the sound that starts developing here 01:47:731 (3) - because maintaining the current wiggles and entrance doesn't make too much sense
if you start the wiggle here 01:47:349 (1) - doesn't make sense because 01:47:095 (1) - has the same pitch as the start of 1/8 meaning that there is no point in making it 1/8 and also, could have more diversity during that part and starting the 1/8 wiggle at 01:47:731 (3) -
forgot to mention but for 00:23:451 (1,2,3) - maybe would be more fitting a repetitive 1/4 wiggles on a corner instead of three separated sliders because feels off-pace
is it that neccesary? i find it worth leaving it, i added a note in sync to the slider zzz
for me is like not giving any issues there, but if that's reallyyy neccesary i would (prefer to leave different things that would remark my diff in difference of the others and also fit)
i think the first one is ok but i noticed something while checking this. 03:46:544 (5,6) - made this a 2 hdash note jump and 03:46:294 (4) - became a slider instead :)
01:20:483 (5) - made a distance for this one and the other one i decide to keep it, since it's mostly the entrance of the hype part and making a big chain before that would be a little too much for the rhythm and the emphasis
not sure to change this one, quite unrelevant since the players would need to retry the map more than one time to get this FC, so i consider kinda hard to now remember that this spinner is unrelevant to the gameplay, just fits