ok well sorry i could not really give any good feedback I think your map looks pretty good I can say try to use similar looking patterns for similar sounding sections in the songs so you can associate the sound of the song with the patterns but i dont know if that helps. gl make more maps
01:32:132 (4) - this really high gap from (4) to (5) seems out of place because theres nothing in the song that calls for it and the rest of the section doesnt have this high spacing so you can lower the spacing
00:02:282 (8) - the spacing between this note and the last one is very high but the loud drum sound is actually on the next note, so you can make the spacing between (7) and (8) smaller and the spacing between (8) and the next (1) higher so the high spacing is on the loud drum note