01:32:942 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is kinda hard to do also maybe change the pattern here alittle because it's doesn't stand out in game
01:53:942 (5,6) - i think you should replace those and add a slider there https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16436472/c091 something like this
03:04:071 (1) - remove this slider and change it to this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15064361/1271
03:03:785 (3) - this slider doesn't land on a sound Move it to the next YELLOW TICK 03:03:821 (3) - here
01:45:214 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is kinda overmapped , right after a break is kinda rude