02:31:554 - why is the density for this part the same as the previous when most instruments of the previous are gone and/or quiet? There is barely anything going on in the song and yet you still spam streams and have the same spacing for every stream and jump and you’re still using the same density as the previous even though this part is waaaaaaaay less intense in density than the previous. I’d highly suggest not using streams at all in this part and mainly sticking with following the drums only, perhaps doing something akin to this: https://gokublack.s-ul.eu/a4vFF8QF
02:28:923 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is following nothing and suffers from the same issues I mentioned before. Overmapped and no clear instrument that is following I'd suggest deleting it and then listening to what the song is doing: https://gokublack.s-ul.eu/8sDJNhgg which should end up being something like this.
02:14:712 - this part suffers from the same issue as the previous one but on a much worse scale. Everything is way too overmapped, there is no clear instrument that you are following anymore and it’s not clear at all what you’re trying to follow. 02:23:923 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - stuff like this makes absolutely no sense whatsoever when listening to the song: https://gokublack.s-ul.eu/wkzBG21A this is what the song is doing but you chose to map it with just sliders? which completely contradicts what you’ve been doing so far in that part. I’d suggest going through this whole part again and just focusing on mapping one instrument THEN when it’s more fitting you can add additive rhythm.
01:57:081 (6) - this should be following the same rhythm as 01:48:660 (1,2,3) - as the song repeats the same sounds and there’s no reason not to do the same thing. You even do it later here as well 02:05:502 (2,3,4) -
01:41:028 to 02:38:923 - this part feels rather rushed without much thought going into it, the rhythm that is hitsounded is not even the same as the one being mapped. The rhythm in general feels way too overmapped compared to what the song is actually doing. I’d suggest removing 01:42:081 (2) - and anything similar to it in that part and extending sliders similar to 01:42:739 (5) - so they end on a big white tick and then adding a circle here 01:43:397, as this will provide more clarity to what the song is actually doing. It should end up looking something like this: https://gokublack.s-ul.eu/25mDvHLR