01:12:438 (1) - Might be more appropriate to have one bigger slider and a spinner instead of this and two spinners because of the vocal sustaining through both the slider and the first spinner.
03:38:969 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This portion is over mapped due to the instrument playing the rhythm of a continuous double.
01:50:703 (1,2,3,4,5) - Missed opportunity for spacing emphasis. I notice you increase the spacing as the pitch gets higher, however, these sliders remain the same spacing.