This pattern 00:50:465 (1,1,2,3,4) - could be much better if you didn't skip the piano on the downbeat at 00:51:343, I'm not sure, but i think you started the piano on the blue tick here at 00:51:417 (1) - because you wanted to have a 1/2 gap between the slider end and the circle so it was easier to read (?) but if that's the reason you can just make slider end at the red line 00:51:197 without sacrificing the rhythm, E.G https://gyazo.com/6a231cbf849e9eb648448999d163846e
that way the pattern is also consistent with 00:53:099 (5,6,7,8,9) - 00:56:026 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:57:782 (3,4,5,6,7) -
00:45:781 (2) - object not snapped 00:46:660 (5) - same with this one
01:17:816 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - just a suggestion. here for the 1/3 rhythm I think you can display this idea of decreasing in pitch in a less sharp pattern, like this for example https://gyazo.com/95d9f5c213245c48c65d8ab53ab12312
01:17:047 (1,2,3,4) - these back and forth overlapping jumps stand out to me, its unique but i don't think its justified when everytime you follow vocals it's spacing according to the intensity of the vocals, the overlapping is sus aswell, sooo maybe just do normal jumps the same way you did the others i think idk xd
00:14:355 (3) I find this to be a bad rhythm decision, ignoring the stronger and clearer sound in the red line, instead focusing on a 1/3 rhythm
00:26:662 (3,4) - yet this is the same pattern/sounds but you take a better rhythm choice, I suggest changing 00:14:355 (3) into a pattern of 00:26:662 (3,4) style for a better experience while playing
00:17:432 (3,4) - I suggest leaving a 1/4 gap like this between the slider end and the circle https://gyazo.com/e2c67a4772b2f666176b88f1a8b25d6c , the reason being that a 1/8 gap
is likely to cause a break/miss, why? because the player is probably not expecting such an intense rhythm for this reverse slider, and would likely let go as if it was a 1/4 gap
01:28:201 (3,4) - same here
00:25:477 (1,2) - I don't think there are sounds to support a stream here, you should instead follow the drums that support a 1/2 rythm after the repeating slider,
in the end of that section the rhythm I suggest should look like this in the timeline https://gyazo.com/48079eb7857d173778ab65ca5cb654eb
00:24:727 (9) - is emphasizing vocals but only has half the phrase (CO-LATE instead of CHO-CO-LATE)
I sugguest replacing 00:24:427 (7) - with a repeating slider snapped to 1/1 to emphasize vocals because
they are the most prominent sound in that section of the song, so the repeating slider will go CHO-CO-LATE xD
I think you should replace this spinner with a circle, the circle is more aproppiate for it since there is a strong sound on the dowbeat there
and since spinners don't give strong feedback they are more fitting for fading out sounds like after the downbeat, so I think you should place spinner right after the downbeat on the blue tick