01:04:620 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This section not only synth sound 1/4 spam. U need to find good rhytm for this section , please)
00:36:927 (1,2,3,4) - imo u can improve interpritation here. 00:36:927 (1,2) - and 00:37:389 (3,4) - synth have different pitch. U can show it like: https://i.imgur.com/SNqwP27.png
00:21:235 (10,1) - this visual spacing looks bad. Maybe try smthng like : https://i.imgur.com/7CSr7bb.png
00:19:620 (4,7) - this overlap looks bad. Maybe make blanket for 00:19:851 (5,7) - this? https://i.imgur.com/1voIFUv.png
00:08:774 (6,1) - better so stack this. like u did here : 00:06:927 (6,1) - , 00:14:312 (6,1) - ,00:16:158 (6,1) -
01:33:140 (5) - i think u should rotate this object to show the difference between instruments https://i.imgur.com/tml9dBP.png
Like u did here : 01:40:640 (4) -
02:03:140 (6) - rotate this too
02:00:914 (2,3) - looks like u can make smthng like this, to emphasis claps. I'ts still kiai section) https://i.imgur.com/UCzBlG7.png
02:02:789 (6,7) - https://i.imgur.com/X6Twcjy.png
02:04:664 (3,4) - https://i.imgur.com/RoFBT2L.png
02:06:422 (3,4,5) - , 02:08:414 (2,3) - , 02:10:289 (6,7) - same principle.
it will be more fun to play imo :)
01:12:188 (2,3) - too big emphasis
01:11:844 (1) - here is a kick sound and 01:11:499 (7,1) - this spacing is fine,
01:12:188 (2) - here is a snare sound(clap) , and 01:11:844 (1,2) - this spacing is fine too, but
01:12:533 (3) - here no drums but spacing is really huge
I map breathing with a 1/4 slider. 00:15:898 (1) - 01:59:282 (1) - 01:51:898 (1) -
00:17:744 (2) - but here i use circle coz synth sound appears.