00:39:833 (7,8,9) -
ok not gonna lie this pattern is actually really good
00:37:539 (1,2,3,4) -
if you haven't yet, enable stacking in the editor (https://i.imgur.com/PTKSjwI.png)
fix your blanketing
00:15:833 (2) -
this curve
Suggestion for all future maps:
try to make the smaller sliders follow the same curve.
you can do this by copying a longer slider and pasting it somewhere else on the timeline (very close to the base tho)
and changing the anchors so that the slider looks just like a shorter version of the longer one
https://i.imgur.com/PbE2hvN.png
00:12:128 (1,1) -
move the slider and change the first white anchor so that it blankets the circle, the slider already make me bust a fat one but if you do this it'll make professionalbox bust 3 fat ones
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10180556
Since this is a Normal, you should try to keep a consistent 1x distance spacing throughout, and avoid placing things closer to eachother than a full beat apart UNLESS there is a specific sound in the background you are trying to emphasize (e.g. 00:14:900 (5,1) - )
also cs way too small w
01:15:200 (1) -
Try to replace this with a circle and then the spinner starting 1/16 after to emphasize the brass.
Example: https://i.imgur.com/lxMic47.png