00:39:829 (21) - 3/2 away from previous note. Sure BPM is slow but to make sure it follows ranking criteria, this could even be removed fully so emphasize the syncopation ion the vocals
00:17:675 (7) - 00:25:059 (11) - and similar: I'd opt for moving these 1/2 back as to follow the vocal better. It still gives a 2/1 space and make flow a bit better
01:10:345 (56,57,58,59) - I'd say remove 57 as to mimic 01:07:992 (34,35,36) -
the actual 1/2 between each note can emphasize "monster" in a fun way.
01:12:992 (21,22,23,24,25) - maybe nerf this into kkk k just because it follows a triple and the bpm is over 190. Technically this isn't wrong though, just too straining.
yes, did a kkk instead at 00:54:734 (82,83,84) - to follow vocals, applies to all similar parts too.