01:52:440 --> 02:14:383 I think this section sounds way better without the synth stabs (01:52:440 (1) 01:55:011 (4) 01:55:183 (1) it sounds very very goofy at the moment
00:49:011 (3,1) tweak position of the 3 a bit 
04:48:840 (5,6,7) this kinda flows weird atm, plays way better if you rotate by 90 CW and put it in the top left (blanket 04:49:183 (7) & 04:47:983 (1))
The slidershapes are already different from one another (one is teardrop one is diamond), and yes the synths are different sounds but it's the same rhythm and idea, I think it's fine as is
I changed it a bit to reduce the spacing from 02:11:590 (1) - to 02:11:763 (1) - but I kept the same visual idea because to me, this snare 02:11:763 (1) - sound warrants some space
Listening at 25% the synth actually starts on 02:06:504, it is the loudest/highest pitch on 02:06:590 but I do feel that what I have right now especially with the percussive things in the background
I think stacking them would arguably make it more cluttered and hard to read, I think it's fine as is, 07:05:383 (1,2,1,1) - these are spaced enough to read imo
The jerky snappy aim was intentional and it's one of the (if not the most) intense part of the song, it's the highest the vocals ever go in the entire song
I think it plays fine, 06:16:590 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these are all kicks and this is where the vocals start 06:17:107 (1) - but there's still percussive things in the back that are active, this 06:17:625 (1,2,3,4) - is separate from 06:17:194 (2,3,4,5,6) - because of the clappy sound here 06:17:625 (1) -
I don't really like this idea, the snare drums here are on 04:19:176 - and 04:19:263 - which I'm ignoring, and I don't want to confuse the player or overcomplicate this part