Theres some inconsistent NCing on the part before the 2nd kiai section. I'd put the NCs on 02:43:789 (1) 02:44:848 (4) 02:46:613 (3) 02:48:025 (1) 02:49:437 (4) 02:50:848 (1) 02:52:260 (4) 02:53:672 (1) theres some others too after that but I think you get my idea
02:22:084 (4,5) - I think this would play better as a triple because its what the guitar is doing (try something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14304413/31aa). It would also make this part a bit less repetitive. Same thing goes for 02:24:907 (4,5), 02:27:731 (4,5) and 02:30:554 (4,5)
02:04:260 (1) - I'd put this slider somewhere else, its a strong sound similar to 01:58:613 (1) and 02:09:907 (1) where you didnt overlap them with the next note
00:56:506 (1) - This entire part until the next break has some inconsistant new combos. Sometimes you put the NC on the 4th tick (like 01:09:554 (1) and 01:14:495 (1)) while sometimes you put it on the 1st or 3rd kick (like 01:19:084 (1) and 01:31:789 (1)). I'd recommend putting the NCs only on those, they are the more important sounds.
difference between the spaced burst and the other bursts is that the spaced burst is on the start of a guitar note which is why I changed the spacing
distance snap first 6 notes is 0.4x, then 0.8x and then 1.3x. I'd argue that the music gets "intense" enough every 6 notes to have the DS like that. as for the spacing. as for the distance between 01:16:729 (6,1) I personally dont like how it looks when I make it any bigger
the guitar on 00:22:911 (5,6,7,8,9,10) sounds slightly different from 00:22:416 (1,2,3) (also on all the other triples) which is why i changed spacing, I like it the way it is right now
the jump at 00:43:104 (6,7) - already kinda serves as emphasis, but I guess having the spacing also be a bit bigger then it is right now makes sense