01:53:510 (113510|0,113510|1,113574|2,113574|3,113638|0,113638|1,113703|2,113703|3,113767|0,113767|1,113831|3,113831|2,113895|0,113895|1,113959|2,113959|3,114023|0,114023|1,114087|2,114087|3,114151|0,114151|1,114215|3,114215|2,114279|1,114279|0,114536|2,114536|3,114600|1,114600|0,114664|2,114664|3,114728|0,114728|1,114792|2,114792|3,114856|0,114856|1,114920|3,114920|2,114985|1,114985|0,115049|2,115049|3,115113|1,115113|0,115177|3,115177|2,115241|1,115241|0,115305|3,115305|2) - needs pattern change, also the chordthrill doesnt really fit in this part and feels slightly overdone
chordthrill kinda fits better in the very next section from the highlighted part, although very short, it fits there better for example
like for example, chordthrills fits this 03:52:485 (232485|0,232485|1,232549|3,232549|2,232613|1,232613|0,232677|3,232677|2,232741|0,232741|1,232805|2,232805|3,232869|0,232869|1,232933|3,232933|2,232997|1,232997|0,233062|3,233062|2,233126|1,233126|0,233190|2,233190|3,233510|3,233510|2,233574|0,233574|1,233638|2,233638|3,233703|0,233703|1,233767|3,233767|2,233831|1,233831|0,233895|2,233895|3,233959|1,233959|0,234023|3,234023|2,234087|1,234087|0,234151|2,234151|3,234215|0,234215|1) - part, but the aforementioned part, it feels overdone and overmapped
00:34:197 - before this timeline in this section, triplets could be tone down (and maybe LN if needed?), there will be stronger buildup/progression effect to later parts of the the map
also that it feels overdone (not necessarily overmapped) for the soft introduction part
and maybe use 2 notes for chord piano notes, and 1 notes for soft piano notes, im not sure what to suggest with LN here exactly since there are no sounds with clear starting and ending point (piano doesnt count since it fades off, at least with the amount of piano used here)
00:36:213 (36213|2,36223|0,36263|1,36303|3,36343|2,36384|1) - imo, a simple 1234 mapped to 1/16 should do, this feels bit chordy for a soft piano sweep (dont know to describe it)
00:54:664 (54664|2,54920|2) - in sections like this and similar, some notes feel bit overmapped as there isnt any sound
also with lower note density, this could create stronger contrast on the upcoming chorus as a bonus
00:01:576 - 00:23:253 - This section needs some spicing to make it more interesting to play, say like 2 note jacks on places without synths, then normal mapping on synth sounds; a 8-beat sample I mapped that you could apply (and adjust as you see fit): https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15433417/d58a
01:14:156 (74156|2) - Turn to normal notes because of slightly muted synth sound, also to emphasis on the kick sound as well
01:00:995 (60995|2,61769|2,62543|1) - Could have these notes turned into normal notes since synth sounds are kinda muted, also can add little more emphasis on kick sounds every 2 beats in this section
00:44:930 - to - 00:48:027- Feels like this section could benefit from notes being mapped in red ticks as those kicks are more noticable than kicks on white beat, a simple 1/2 shift would do; just an example below, adjust as you see fit
Something like shifting 00:45:317 (45317|2,45705|0,46092|1,46479|3,46866|2,47253|0,47640|1) - backward by 1/2 beat then add a note on 3rd column from the left on 00:47:834
01:26:845 (86845|0,87259|2,87672|4,87672|6) - This section could be changed to right-left-right to match the pitch better, say, like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15380784/768a
I'll try to slowly change patterns to have counter-clockwise and clockwise flow every 4 beat, though might need quite some time; also applied 04:37:568 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - to 02:23:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - for the sake of consistency, good catch