02:42:134 (1,2,3,4,5) - Looking at the same drum roll in other kiai's, this seems a under emphasized, no? Compare 03:47:534 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - and 01:23:534 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - to it. Maybe slight increase?
03:10:734 (1,2,1) I felt like 03:10:934 (1) - passively represents the piano and I can't really hear what the red tick is supposed to be emphasizing? I also felt like the 1/8 slider was a bit overkill. I think this might be better? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19388814/51de
02:47:334 (1) - The top of the loop looks kinda flat with the double anchor, maybe remove one?
03:09:334 (2) - there's a really high string here that you don't emphasize. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19388806/4d63 I think if you just move https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19388806/4d63 to the left a bit it might be better? unsure whether this screws with readability
03:15:134 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like there's nothing else in the map as difficult as this pattern (maybe skill issue) and it's not emphasizing something particularly powerful in the song. I think facing all sliders up or down would make this feel a little more in line with the level of intensity https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19388791/299a. Or just increase the spacing like with 01:23:934 (1,2,3,4) - or 02:42:134 (1,2,3,4) -.
why does 03:19:534 (1,2) - land on 1/8 (it's representing drums right?) compared to 003:00:734 (1,2) - , 3:06:734 (1,2) - , 03:13:134 (1,2,1,2) - ? My naive adjustment would be to make all of them land on 1/4, but if you adjust the other parts of the pattern [url=https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/2185869/discussion/4622123/timeline#/4665626]like i suggested[/url] I think keeping these objects 1/8 to improve readability is fine?
03:13:934 (1,1,1,1) -, 03:19:934 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I'm not actually hearing the difference between this and 03:00:734 (1,2,1,2,1) - and 03:07:134 (1,2,1,2,1) - where you end your sliders on 1/4 ticks. I think either all of these sliders I've mentioned should end on 1/8 or all should end on 1/4.