03:22:881 (1,2,3) - this is a hard reading challenge, on a map with doubles seeing two approach circles stacked, a newer player would read that as the double, rather than the jump being a double. this may? be made clearer with higher ar, or better ncs, or maybe a bit of remapping
02:41:548 (1) - i can see what ur doing with these patterns and sliders and its good, just this slider is ugly and a bit too sharp i think