I think 1/3s like 01:58:387 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - 02:00:672 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 02:05:815 (1,1,1) - 02:09:529 (1,1,1) - You don't have to NC since this section has a lot of 1/3s and 1/6s rhythms, so the player doesn't need visual assistance to see the difference in rhythm.
01:56:910 (10) - This note is an overmap (no drum in the song). You could remove this to make this 1/6 stream a bit more forgiving. Could also add some spacing to emphasize 01:56:958 (1) -
01:32:815 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Nice, I like the rhythm here since it's following the downbeats and vocals of the song.
01:29:672 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - These notes don't really follow the downbeats or vocals. The downbeats are on the red ticks, so there should be some emphasis (e.g. start of a new stream) like on 01:29:958 - and 01:30:529 -
00:25:387 (11) - It's better to NC and start the stream here instead of 00:25:529 (1) - since the downbeat actually starts there.
00:07:101 (3,1) - probably should add more spacing between these two notes since 00:07:244 (1) - is pretty intense and should have more emphasis than 00:06:958 (2,3) - which currently has a bit more spacing
00:01:815 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think you should do a accelerating stream here considering all the other 5-burst streams in this section are constant speed.