00:39:808 (39808|1,39865|2,39923|3,39981|0,40071|2,40137|1,40203|3,40269|0,40308|1,40346|2,40384|3,40442|0,40500|2,40577|1,40654|3) - vs our main baseline --> 00:34:235 (34235|2,34308|0,34380|3,34453|1,34525|2,34598|3,34670|2,34743|0,34815|1,34888|3) -
definitely feels like 00:34:235 (34235|2,34308|0,34380|3,34453|1,34525|2,34598|3,34670|2,34743|0,34815|1,34888|3) - has its main baseline overpowering the chiptune noise.
But at 00:39:808 (39808|1,39865|2,39923|3,39981|0,40071|2,40137|1,40203|3,40269|0,40308|1,40346|2,40384|3,40442|0,40500|2,40577|1,40654|3) - its more noticeable we are using the same structure when we should use a different one to notify that there is a different feel needed here.
00:27:661 (27661|3,27705|1,27767|0,27862|2,27957|0,28034|1,28091|2,28148|1,28205|3,28262|2,28319|3) - as the flow suggest, there is a bassline that sticks the same throughout 00:28:429 (28429|2,28481|0,28574|1,28646|3,28719|1,28791|3,28864|2,28918|1,28972|2,29009|0,29081|2,29154|0,29226|1,29226|3,29305|1) - pattern.
Therefore, I don't think right --> left direction can be used in 00:28:429 (28429|2,28481|0,28574|1,28646|3,28719|1,28791|3,28864|2,28918|1,28972|2,29009|0,29081|2,29154|0,29226|1,29226|3,29305|1) -
Its better to use the same direction to properly express that the same bass is repeated, along with the main synth u are following.
00:26:839 (26839|0,26881|1,26919|2,26956|3,26994|0,27031|1,27069|2,27106|3,27144|0,27181|1,27219|2,27256|3,27294|0,27331|1,27369|2,27406|3) - again, it would be nice to increase snaps as the sound progresses more louder.
00:21:316 (21316|2,21418|1,21482|3,21538|2,21621|0,21677|3,21732|1,21825|2,21899|3,21973|1,22047|0) - snaps and lengths do feel too similar with 00:20:566 (20566|3,20621|1,20677|0,20732|2,20788|1,20862|3,20936|2,21010|0,21084|1,21158|2,21232|0) - before it.
I feel like it misses a lot of potential to make 00:21:316 (21316|2,21418|1,21482|3,21538|2,21621|0,21677|3,21732|1,21825|2,21899|3,21973|1,22047|0) - different with funky snaps just like the song suggest with its funky rhythms.
00:16:524 (16524|0,16524|1,16690|3,16772|0,16837|2,16903|3,16968|1,17034|2,17099|3,17099|0) - vs 00:17:263 (17263|2,17329|3,17355|0,17459|1,17483|2,17579|0,17611|1,17740|3,17772|2,17820|0,17868|2,17868|3,17868|1) -
direction should be polar opposite so it flows better because both are much different with pitch etc.
so just ctrl h 00:17:263 (17263|2,17329|3,17355|0,17459|1,17483|2,17579|0,17611|1,17740|3,17772|2,17820|0,17868|2,17868|3,17868|1) -
00:16:690 (16690|3,16837|2,16903|3,16968|1,17034|2) - volume here seems much more crescendo rather then decrescendo here?
best if we just flipped the lengths around to follow that.