00:33:709 – I think you can add a note at column 3 for the sound that 00:33:772 (33772|1,33835|2) represent
00:18:389 (18389|1,18389|2) - These LN's emphasis feels quite off. 00:18:223 and 00:18:554 are the main vocal while 00:18:389 is more like to support 00:18:223. No other diff is using this double LN. I think you can make it like this if you want to keep the vocal:
Or just make 00:18:389 double rice.
02:28:856 - Nitpicking but I think there should be a sound at 02:28:919. Maybe make it like this:
Just my preference, but I think some of the jacks like 02:17:133 (137133|3,137259|3), 02:21:167 (141167|3,141293|3), etc. could be blended into shield like 02:25:201 (145201|3,145327|3) for better layering/feeling.
00:08:058 (8058|0,8184|0), 00:16:125 (16125|3,16251|3) - maybe I have skill issue but this thing is deceivingly hard for this difficulty which might cause frustration. 00:23:940 (23940|0,24192|0,24318|0), 00:32:007 (32007|3,32259|3,32385|3) – are even harder.