bro you forgot something 01:56:757 (3,4) ig its from the first pattern that I timestamped but why are they there
00:50:140 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern is I'm guessing following the background instruments but most of the time you should follow the dominant sound which is vocals and piano in this case you can put here 00:50:293 (2,3,4) - two 1/1 sliders and a note after on the red tick and it'll play better, 01:16:119 (4) - there's a triple on the red tick you can make a 1/2 slider followed by a double or just a note and a triple. 00:49:518 (10,11,12) - I think this should be either stacked or overlapping just like other patterns like this for example 00:08:305 (1,2,3) 00:19:373 (1,2,3,4,5,6), 01:53:833 (9) - idk if this is not stacked on purpose or not 01:53:833 (9), also I think this slider 01:09:221 (6) is a bit too slow.