idk shit about mapping so take this with a grain of salt, but the pattern at 04:00:836 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) both looks and feels really clunky/weird to play. I'd suggest shaping it more like the rest of the streams (idk if thats the right way to phrase it, but)
03:57:236 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern is so fucking sexy holy
not related to the actual map, but perhaps change the diffname to something more fitting of the song? from what i can hear the song it's about a feeling of longing for someone who's no longer in your life. Maybe shorten it to "i just wanted you to be proud of me." or be basic and go with "Nostalgia" Good map tho :)