easy suggestions: 00:05:607 Slider curved to the right, 00:07:940 could be more in the middle, 00:08:273 matching with that more to the right, and less to the right (not that wide, more tall), 00:09:607 bent to top right,00:10:273 bent to left right, 00:11:273 could better be left under the last note, 00:11:607 right under the last note, 00:50:940 could be bent to the right, 00:51:607 could get placed a little more up and more left from the last note, rest is actually good, but i got an offset from 1608, i would also add video and more related tags, i can help you if you want with your map (dont get yourself teased by the fact i have no map, i deleted them all, but im not bad)