00:01:027 (3,4,5,6) - these slides could look nicer. smoother curve on the big slider 00:05:642 (6) - would look as an almost straight, slightly curved slider. and have the end point in a different direction to emphasize the downbeat into small break, similar to what you did here 00:04:719 (3,4,5,6) - where the direction of 6 breaks the flow. 00:04:719 (3,4,5,6) - could also use touch ups on shape
00:12:796 (5) - placement looks awkward. moving it down and a little to the right would look and play nicer
00:15:104 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the repeated layering seems too rigid. i think you could touch up the slider shapes and open up the pattern so it doesnt feel as tight.
00:38:181 (4) - make shape look nicer, maybe reward the jumps before so its less cluttered going into the next pattern
01:03:104 (3) - & 01:17:873 (1) - smooth shape out
01:28:950 (1,2,3,4) - i really like the idea,but i would reposition and change the angle on 3 & 4
01:45:565 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - the layering of the sliders should be more consistent. the second group of sliders 1,2,3 are much tighter but essentially the same pattern. 01:49:373 (1,1) - 2 spinner in a row like this kinda :/