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epic map

I think some decelerating/accelerating stuff could be better

01:10:351 - 02:29:188 - the pitch of the sounds is getting higher, maybe make the stream accelerating instead of decelerating?
01:43:404 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - could make this accelerating
01:52:996 (5,6,7,8) - pitches are going up, consider having the spacing go up as well? Also maybe space this out so it doesn't overlap?
01:58:055 (1,1,1) - spacing to the last 1 should maybe be bigger
02:27:182 - you might want to gradually decrease SVs here

There might be some problems with SV usage

00:26:485 - I think you should use lower SV for this section, compared to 00:48:811, or 01:45:322, or 01:59:275, all of which have this same SV
00:59:973 - here the song gets more intense, maybe increase SV? Same on repeats: 01:59:275 > 01:45:322 and 02:18:810 > 02:07:647.
01:45:322 - this is arguably more intense than 01:33:462, I think you might want to increase SV, not decrease it.
02:36:253 - SV here is just as big as 01:59:275, which doesn't really make sense

Apart from a couple objects, the SV stays between 0.75x and 1.2x and mostly only has the values 0.75x, 1x and 1.2x. I think you could go lower on the calmer parts and have more varied SVs

S1GMA

there might be problems with contrast

SV:

00:01:085 - SV in this first section is too high. It is the same as 00:51:908, which is significantly more intense.
00:29:320 - 03:28:614 - intensity drops, so should probably the SV
03:22:967 - this section is around the same intensity as 02:08:143 or 00:51:908, I don't think it makes sense for the SV to drop from 1x to 0.85x, maybe have it the same?

Apart from a couple objects, the SV stays between 1x -> 1.2x. You might want to widen that range

rhythm density:

00:01:085 - you use the same 1/2 filler rhythm structure in this section, but it is a lot less intense then all of the others. U might want to have more 1/1 gaps and simpler rhythms instead to show that
00:15:202 - 00:29:320 - intensity of the former section is a lot higher than the latter, yet apart from the triples at the end, rhythm density is mostly the same
00:57:555 - this section also has basically the same rhythm density, but the drumming has triples and blue ticks, which is very different from 00:15:202. Similar things apply to 02:13:790, you might want to include more triples in this section too

https://i.imgur.com/vaVDECR.png spacings like this are usually too low for the verse of a 5* map

U might want to vary the rhythm density more throughout the map. Same with spacings I think

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it feels like S2 was last yesterday wtf