i agree with the 1st one, fixed!
For the 2nd one, the note on 02:10:322 - i want to put emphasis on the 5 chimes, and compared to 02:11:351 - it's a weaker sound so i will keep it.
i wanted to build up the sequence from 1+2+2, to 3+4+2, to 3+4+6. I believe since I'm using even patterns to improvise around the vocals, it's fine to keep it as is.