might need to add "on and on mojipittan ことばのパズル もじぴったん" to tags, might've missed a few but they're for the song this is remixed from (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zQhdonfgVM0) (taken from djpop's anoneanone set)
01:03:613 (5,1) - 01:08:665 (1,1) - 00:30:455 (1,2,3) - I guess these do follow the song's rhythm but it does feel a bit underwhelming to map most of the drum rolls leading to major downbeats passively
uhhh more general things to keep in mind for future maps
check your playfield usage, most of the objects are kinda in the middle (ctrl+a to see all objects)
sliders with unbalanced anchor distribution (like anchors super close to the head or tail) can look super cramped, especially if they are short (such as 00:03:669 (1,2) - )
slider tails/bodies don't provide the same emphasis as active clicking, for example, the slider at 00:32:485 (2) - represents a strong sound passively with a slider tail, which just doesn't have the same impact
in general, maps are a representation of a song, so the map should follow the song, so like relatively unintense parts in the song such as 00:08:809 (3,4,5) - 00:25:720 (1,2,3) - 00:33:220 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 00:50:131 (1,2,3,4) - probably don't warrant big jump spam
comboing feels pretty off, for most songs usually you just want to mostly put new combos on the major downbeats (big white ticks), or objects that pass through them (also this song is just kinda composed weird so theres a decent amount of relatively uncommon things like sliders ending on a major downbeat)
01:06:896 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - section feels like it just completely ignores the song, such as 01:10:425 (1) - as an example, the vocals change but the map keeps having the exact same 1-2 patterns, or at 01:11:014 (1) - the 1-2s just randomly change to copy pasted fiery 1-2s when nothing has changed yet in the song
also the 1-2s all being just stacked (or slightly increasing in spacing) feels pretty boring
the slider velocity change for the intense part around 00:47:926 (6) - feels really underwhelming because its only an increase from 1.02 from the section around 00:26:886 (5) - to 1.22 which is just not a huge diff