00:07:354 - I would make this slider to be reverse (00:07:167 - 00:07:729)
00:10:354 - same as above
00:10:354 - same as above
00:11:620-00:12:979 - elements one peak later (it sounded out of rhythm)
00:12:745 - slider extended to 00:13:167, remove note
00:30:042 - move the slider to 00:29:854, add a note at 00:30:417
00:32:667 - i think it will better if you add some sound here (think of something, maybe speed up the slider and reverse it)
00:36:604-00:57:041 - a lot of it is out of rhythm, 1-2 ticks earlier or later (maybe I'll fix it and show you, because it's too long to write all the moments that i noticed)
01:06:416 - up to this point, you can extend the reverse slider from
01:10:354 - reverse this slider to 01:10:541
01:31:494 - not in rhythm, move to 01:31:354. i think you can add a tricky slider from 01:31:354 to 01:31:541 or just leave two notes