in the map i can see that there is rhythm consistency but the spacing isn't as consistent with it changing alot in places i dont think it needs to. also there is alot random new combos which i think you should be more careful of in the future. some of the sliders that you are doing in this map could also be improved with they looking a little bit like you randomly placed anchors and hoped for the best. i could suggest taking more time while you are creating the sliders. i can also see that you are blanketing some notes but same for the sliders you should take more time while making the blankets and maybe use the approach circles to help you make them. but overall im seeing some sort of structure in your mapping which i think is a good thing to see
00:28:380 (4,1) - this looks a bit funny maybe you could put the 4 further away from the slider