"紅楼 ～ Eastern Dream" should be romanized as "Kourou ~ Eastern Dream"
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01:51:661 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Because of what the guitar is doing, maybe this could use some other type of pattern? I like the variable spacing streams and all but there are quite a few of them in this map and this feels like it could stand out more in that regard
00:48:038 (1,2,1,2) - Relatively minor but I don't know if the rather subtle piano on blue tick warrants a 3/4 rhythm here, since you've otherwise been following vocals so intently the whole kiai this sticks out like a bit of a sore thumb imo.
00:58:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Besides the snare on red ticks, the piano-bass-snare ghost notes combo are all 1/3s pretty much, so I'm not sure what this stream is following on 1/4.
Removed finishers from sounds that didn't have a crash, though left/added a few that had a china like 09:58:490 (732) - , 02:03:990 (576) - and 10:03:290 (750) - , also removed one k at 09:58:390 (731) -
it's a bit weaker though, but mostly I kept the finisher for the held guitar note like at 05:51:690 (1869) -
I see what you mean, but I prefer the slow 1/2 slider for the palm muted note, rather than making it 1/4 with a circle after, regardless of what the drums are doing I don't think it fits as well