00:58:687 - https://kurt.s-ul.eu/cgBLx92r - stack or blanket these somehow. it looks ugly, in general, try to avoid this. this one in particular is around the 1 min mark
00:23:752 (4,1) - 00:28:397 (2,1) - 00:29:945 (2,1) - 00:38:074 (2,3) too big of a jump for 1/4 note (there are probably more, but don't do this)
1/4 spacing in general is inconsistent (like this, https://kurt.s-ul.eu/n4tktzwI , try to keep the gaps at relatively the same length)
00:53:558 (3,4) - why are these not stacked when 00:53:268 (1,2) - is? try to keep the visual aspects the same, at least don't change them for no reason