00:36:014 - 00:41:499 - no pattern or flow, needs replacing/remapping
01:11:842 - 01:14:414 - same pattern 4 times, boring, no flow, perhaps replace with angled jumps? perhaps something similar to this https://i.imgur.com/oHRjf0E.jpg ; https://i.imgur.com/QSr37lk.jpg this after, and end with easier jumps before the stream https://i.imgur.com/wRwfYap.jpg
01:20:242 - some good ideas here, but u dont need to re-use the 2 note stack constantly, dont be afraid to give them a little space
01:26:756 (1) - good example of spacing
01:52:814 (1) - lazy square placement (remap)
02:26:071 (3) - again, good placement, why wasn't this in previous parts of the map
02:40:471 (1) - no flow, remap
02:42:185 (1) - lazy squares again