02:34:445 (1) - try stacking this note on the head of 02:33:752 (1) i think it makes a pretty neat movement
02:47:599 (2) - give this a little more spacing from 1 for consistency with identical parts?
01:16:445 (5) - the harsh angle + heavy spacing makes it difficult to catch, consider moving this a bit closer
01:13:906 (4,5) - i think because of how 5 is angled these don't flow together as naturally as 02:12:983 (4,5) - and 02:46:214 (4,5) - do later