I Already have the explicit permission to use Wonki's SV. https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/783537621124775986/954588527482503178/Screenshot_20220319-105242_Chrome.jpg
Here is the proof :D
00:35:221 - i think you should add more LN like this because the drum sound are getting louder the first two note https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17607051/0339 (for example)
I highly suggest to avoid jack like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17607032/5205 in a stream pattern because its really hard to hit for players, so i recommend to change it to normal double stairs like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17607036/a1e0
move the 01:41:413 (101413|2) - note into the 5th column 1|2|3|4|5|6|7 so it wont cause a note stack.
I suggest using this pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17607016/6b8e at 01:07:088 - , It's for the guitar sound and drum together