02:11:388 (131388|2,131701|0,131857|3) - remove them instead of following other sound, better to simplify it by folowing drums like in next section, sugestion
01:45:451 (105451|2,105659|1,105867|2,106076|1) - we can avoid this trill by filling the empty col 1, my suggestion is below, it has better spread and readability also the LN is moved to col 1 to represent the low vocal pitch
01:44:409 (104409|3,104617|1) - i know the drums are in 1/3s but i tjink it doesn't fit well for this level suggest top simplify it to 1/1 LNs