00:18:668 (1,2,3,4) - this is abit much spacing between this 00:18:368 (6,7,8) - consider nerf this a little or move the 00:18:668 (1,2,3,4) closer
00:11:168 (5) - Copy and paste this and then ctrl + h and ctrl j for this 00:11:568 (6) - like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16891238/2732
switch these two 04:34:330 (2,3) - ? for the better flow to the stream? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16890082/6a76
01:35:335 (1) - How about making them normal for the flow to the stream 01:36:002 (1) - ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16890056/fe69
removing the burst at 02:56:388 (5) - changing to slider and 02:56:649 (3,4) - using the sliderend to cover the beat on blue tick.
02:14:649 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - they are the same except 02:15:431 (1) - the drum on this is loud so I change it to sliderkick same for 02:22:996 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) -