00:34:933 (3,4,5,1) - this could be hard to sight read that there is a pause in between the notes (4,5)
00:29:446 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:30:136 (1,2,3,4) - are poorly spaced and if anything should go upwards because the notes in the song do
02:40:513 (2,3) - 02:41:199 (2,3) - and the next two sets after that I would either fully stack or space and leave that kind of stack to the 1/4 notes
A good example is here 00:50:370 (2,3,3,4) - you map the same sound with the same pattern but a different rhythm which is really confusing to players
01:52:084 (2,3,6,7) - why are these fully stacked compared to the rest of the map
You could make the note here 02:12:056 - further or a harsher motion to better pronounce the song. The note after should be prob be further as it’s a longer pause
02:26:027 (3) - this notes awkward and isn’t on a sound. You don’t need it
The tripplets from 2:45 to 2:50 could be more interesting. Maybe switch direction halfway through