00:46:393 (1) - this might be better with a slider like this here https://imgur.com/a/QOXk1R4
I think you should use less 90 degree sliders, maybe changing them to to be more curved rather than straight lines as it can look pretty bad visually. For example 00:38:210 (3,4,5) - looks really odd and doesn't flow well, which would be hard to read for someone newer to the game.