04:38:942 (1,2) - you are mapping a strong sound passively at (1) slider end. maybe make the slider 1/1 and move (2) to 04:39:323 for better representation of the song
01:11:484 (1,2,3,4) - since you're passively mapping vocals here with reverse slider in top diff, you should do the same in this diff too.
01:01:315 (2,3,4) - 01:01:823 (5,6,7) - 01:02:332 (8,9,1) - maybe change to sliders/reverse sliders instead?
03:52:925 (3,4,1) - 03:53:561 (4,1) - why are you decresing spacing? the song is definitely getting more intense so the stream should increse in spacing
01:34:366 (5) - flow could be better if you ctrl+g this slider