In my opinion mapping is too close to the center, this indicates that the space is not being fully utilized. If you select all the objects on your map(ctrl+a), you will notice that there is some space left on the sides of the screen. And the map will feel better if this space would be filled.
Also i noticed that the map the map contains strange in terms of flow patterns. like here 02:05:493 https://i.ibb.co/F6wnSW9/modd2.jpg. I understood the idea of sliders that direct to the next note, but with a more "sweeping" mapping the flow would be more readable. Also, feel free to use shape primitives to add variety to your patterns. Shapes will also make the map more readable and replayable. https://i.ibb.co/C1pH8P6/mod3.jpg.
i got the idea of this 02:33:575 jumps, but I would not place them in the center.
Maybe in the corner or like here: https://streamable.com/656rtg
Stream on 00:54:011 too rarely splits into new combos.
In my opinion it would be better to use a new combo every beat like:
https://i.ibb.co/S0fKV03/Modding1.jpg
also map will feel much better with AR around 9-9.5, imo 10 ar is too much.
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Sorry for the wait. It is ok when a half of a circle is over the border. Moreover, it is rather better for gameplay. The flow of most of the beatmaps is based on clockwise/counterclockwise movement along the edges of the map
looks better but notes are still in the center. I mapped an "clockwise flow" example of this part to explain what i mean. Also mapping is subjective and I'm not telling you to map like I did, I just want to convey the "flow" concept of beatmapping https://drive.google.com/file/d/1MCgIke3ZkI64E-6QcEeLJBlWIwsVvpUZ/view?usp=sharing
there is the same thing with
streams at 02:01:663, 00:22:259
jumps at 02:33:575
btw it is considered good form to break up combinations more often. The number of notes in one combination should rarely exceed 9-10.
good places for new combo: 01:51:611 00:15:557 00:17:153 00:24:812 00:27:205 00:32:311 and many more