At 00:23:000 01:24:000 and at 02:25:000 there are guitar solos that should be mapped, its a bit weird to just leave it out and replace it with a break
00:40:824 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would make the spacing between these notes a bit more even to match to bit before.
01:35:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The Clap hitsounds are a bit excessive here and does not match the softness of the song at this part
01:48:865 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Similarly to before, the spacing here is uneven does match the parts before
01:59:690 (1,2,3,4) - Another uneven spacing for no reason
My final critique is that the entire map is a bit blocky, this is fine but a lot of parts tend to not have real good flow because of this, the parts i could see with obvious issues include 00:03:711 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 00:45:773 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - and 02:02:474 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - this tends to become less of an issue on the later parts of the map.
This is all on the Separation Diff