I would recommend you to watch pishifat's mapping tutorials, since you dont know a lot of mapping techniques, like visual spacing, rhythm choice and song emphasis. Here's a link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oL3az8FhlB4&list=PLp7-THR1EUHERrIOV4dGClCGGoLIrQtOx
That's a link to a playlist, which has multiple videos on many topics. You should definitely watch them
02:06:312 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - notice how you pattern this in a way that those objects feel connected to each other. They have similar spacing, aesthetics and movement. This is a good way to pattern objects
01:12:526 (1) - there is no sound here, you should extend 01:11:948 (1) - to this point and delete the circle
01:07:093 This section is very inconsistent in terms of difficulty. Notice how much easier 01:07:093 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) is compared to 01:12:526 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1)
00:44:550 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - here you started mapping fast sliders, but afterwards you map those strong kicks with just circles 00:49:058 (1,1,1) , which leads to inconsistency in the map. Similar to 00:50:099 (1,1,1,1,1) where you just change the shapre of slider you established earlier
02:09:086 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - meanwhile those have similar shape, but they dont share anything else between each other. So patterning them around each other will make it much better.
Look in the attached image of my version of the pattern how they all have similar visual spacing and they are connected by rotating 120 degrees and forming a triangle pattern
Also here 01:07:093 (1,2,3,4) you started with mapping slider on white tick, which has a drum sound on it. but you just copypasted the pattern and 01:07:671 (1,2,3,4) - isnt really following anything. You should continue your idea with putting the slider on the drum sound in this section