00:57:160 (304) - maybe removing this? not sure if it'd make it awkward or no, but to me it seems better without.
i dont like these patterns 00:22:178 (108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127) - . could be "K kdk ddk d k kkd d k dkkdd k"
Done. About the examples you gave of deleting some notes from 01:06:853 (44) - to 01:17:402 (70) - , it was really appreciated. I've made some of those, and some others i made myself. I think its good now.