00:48:050 - "つながれば長いなと"→"つながれば良いなと"
9577.png should be "良", not "長" (unless it's used for the artist name)
Reference:
https://www.uta-net.com/song/294013/
https://j-lyric.net/artist/a062160/l052a7c.html
https://www.kkbox.com/jp/ja/song/LWL00-W2ISaqps0qqps0q0XL-index.html
00:35:297 - ここからスローパートなんだけどNoteの密度やSVに変化がなくて抑揚という観点でどうかと思った(最近のBNはここを見るらしい)。00:38:726 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - なんかは音に大きな違いがある00:45:583 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - を作りが一緒だし。Noteを間引くとか、SV下げるとかでスローパートにしてる感を少し出したほうがいいと思いました。
I'd rather make it even louder. :(
I usually make the volume setting quite high because I personally think it makes the map more confortable and enjoyable to play, but I think it should still be considered within an allowance.