I don't know anything about normal diffs but this seems like a lot
of 1/2 jumps and 1/4 rhythm for a new player.
00:40:418 (3) - Slider triangle is really nice but music is different on this slider. This slider also
ends on a stronger sound.
01:48:358 (1) - This note doesn't have a hitfinish like 01:47:691 (1,1)
01:50:358 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Theese sliders don't go back and forth like previous sliders in kiai time. IMO ctrl+g on 01:50:358 (1,1,1,1) would make this sectrion add strain on aim and represent intensity more.
01:01:026 (1,2,1,2) - This is an odd pattern out. This doesn't have the same pattern as 01:02:358 (1,2,1,2) even though the music is the same.
00:38:359 (1) - Give this a stronger hitsound to show change in music like you did with this 00:33:026 (1)
I agree with this on some of my stream shapes and disagree on others. I'm fine with a stream looking immediately displeasing to the eye as long as it fits well within the music in map. That being said, I'm also inexperienced so I'm not very good at visually representing the music. Thank you for the mod!
Added 2 kick sliders to make it into 3 separate 18 note busts. Now it can pretty much be mashed through by most players